By BrokenDoll
Laurus is a centuries old angel, that becomes wrapped up in the machinations of hell and changed utterly. Transformed into a woman she is forced not just to deal with the depravity of hell but with the schemes of a demon lord while she struggles f
I really wanted to like this story but as it went on, it got harder to read.
I feel like the writer doesn't provide enough context for some situations and who's talking. This breaks the immersion for the story and it feels rushed and incomplete.
So more details and better pacing would definitely be better.
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