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Total Views (Chapters): | 21,734 |
Average Views: | 988 |
Word Count: | 30,499 |
Average Words: | 1,386 |
Pages: | 111 |
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I really wanted to like this story but as it went on, it got harder to read.
I feel like the writer doesn't provide enough context for some situations and who's talking. This breaks the immersion for the story and it feels rushed and incomplete.
So more details and better pacing would definitely be better.
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