With some light editing, this could be a real gem. The title is also not that great. This has a real story to tell. It's not just erotica. There's also no NTR or sharing at all. The writer unlike their peers seems to understand actual biology and women for a change. It's a good smut novel. Give it a go?
The story and the plot (the actual plot) are good. Something I didn’t expect to get when I saw the title. The character has some depts and the MC is likable unlike many other stories from this specific sub-genre.
But it also has some flaws, like the lack of system usage. I love it when there are no stat dumps in every or so chapter but what's the point of it being there without using it. I think the author already noticed that and tried to fix it in the later chapter.
And the next glaring flaws are grammar and typos, I, myself, am not a native speaker and I'd bet there're many grammar mistakes I made writing this review. But there are just soooo many mistakes in this story, some of the most glaring ones are missing words, and the author uses the word "simple" instead of "simply" every single time. To the point that you'll have a much nicer reading experience if you just replace every simple you found with simply, which I did with a browser add-on. (The only chapter I saw the word "simply" appearing was in chapter 20)
I knew that this is the author's first story and I really like the story so I'll rate this 5 stars anyway.
this story is good, especially the relationship development and maturity of the MC. The first wife is the best :) better than the original. I hope the characters will not be used later as a background, as is the case in harem, that more girls are forgotten and only the first and second wife play the main violin
it's a pity that MC is not furunari :) (I'm a diehard reader of Yuri)
This novel has Tsundere, Yandere, Glasses Girl, Slut, Kuudere, Tall Girl, Tanned, Tomboy, MILF, Dark-Skinned, and lots more!!
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For three years Calix has suffered from the Backla
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My aunt, the acting queen told me: “Work hard my nephew. You have a royal family to build.”
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He was once a simple boy, drifting aimlessly along with the flow of the world. But one day, he awak
After an unfortunate mishap with some stairs, I found myself in a fantasy world filled with sex and violence. Stripped of everything and turned into breeding stock by the first band of goblins I encountered, I turned to the only weapon I had avail
This is a story about the day in the Life of a Futanari named Anglea. She is a loner that has no Friends. Her entire life, she has been segregated due to her Herophrodite status. After years of verbal bullying, she has decided to end the meek faca
Takumi Chihara is just an average high schooler. With no particularly good looks or academic prowess, he wanders the days finding his role in life together with his friends. At least, that was what he thought was going to happen. But it seemed som
With some light editing, this could be a real gem. The title is also not that great. This has a real story to tell. It's not just erotica. There's also no NTR or sharing at all. The writer unlike their peers seems to understand actual biology and women for a change. It's a good smut novel. Give it a go?
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The story and the plot (the actual plot) are good. Something I didn’t expect to get when I saw the title. The character has some depts and the MC is likable unlike many other stories from this specific sub-genre.
But it also has some flaws, like the lack of system usage. I love it when there are no stat dumps in every or so chapter but what's the point of it being there without using it. I think the author already noticed that and tried to fix it in the later chapter.
And the next glaring flaws are grammar and typos, I, myself, am not a native speaker and I'd bet there're many grammar mistakes I made writing this review. But there are just soooo many mistakes in this story, some of the most glaring ones are missing words, and the author uses the word "simple" instead of "simply" every single time. To the point that you'll have a much nicer reading experience if you just replace every simple you found with simply, which I did with a browser add-on. (The only chapter I saw the word "simply" appearing was in chapter 20)
I knew that this is the author's first story and I really like the story so I'll rate this 5 stars anyway.
Keep up the good work.
Just use Grammarly or something.
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this story is good, especially the relationship development and maturity of the MC. The first wife is the best :) better than the original. I hope the characters will not be used later as a background, as is the case in harem, that more girls are forgotten and only the first and second wife play the main violin
it's a pity that MC is not furunari :) (I'm a diehard reader of Yuri)
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came for the seggs, stayed for the plot.
-Muttsuri Do Sukebe - Yuri, Anna, Rina
-Fallen Love - Yurika
- Ecchi na Onee-chan ni Shiboraretai - Megumi (Megu-nee) and Ayami (Aya-nee)
- TerasuMC - Nao and Hiroki
- Fukushuu saimin - bullying trio
thanks to all the men of culture for sharing the relevant names (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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If not for the truck load of grammar mistakes in the first few chapters, I would have rated this 5*. It's quite good and fun to read to pass the time.
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