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The story feels like a play. The MC gets task and completes it in the next moment. The chances for world building and character building lost. Then you have the forced character emotions... I get it a character needs to have a set personality but don't force it make us slowly discover it.
But the main problem is the feeling of no connection with the MC. A Mary sue character with no connection is more of an aversion than anything.
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