Alright, so I could tell you some fancy synopsis, but you came here for Pokémon, so it's not like you don't know what is up. Instead, I am going to tell you a bit about the mechanics of my story.
First! If you are looking for a journey that includes catching Pokémon and battles, you have come to the right place! But! The Pokémon will all get human like forms after they are caught, and will not be battling very much. They will be doing other things with Landon, the trainer, but I am sure you can rub a couple cents together to figure out what that means!
Second! Humans will be caught, but mostly Waifu material. While some guys will be caught, there will be no gay stuff with them and the MC. The girls that he catches will be doubling as his Pokémon because of special skins they get for there poke balls. I could go into that more, but read the damn book!
Lastly, there is a lot of sex in this book, but there is a storyline, so there will be times where the smut is spread out, or where it happens back to back. Also, the beginning is a bit rough, and I have to go back and fix some, but everything is straightened out later on. Sorry about that!
Extra chapters @ Patreon.com/magic_
Discord: https://discord.gg/jyFRGudWZ6
We are like 10 chapters in and I can already tell this is going to go places. The grammar is good, the plot exists, and the smut is legit well written. Also, best pokemon premise I've seen... ever on any site. 5/5 as of right now.
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This fanfic has a bad writing style. If you are not an expert on the universe, there is simply nothing to do here. But even if you are an expert: the chapters are short, the erotica is bad, and the atmosphere is also crap.
Bottom line: as an independent work - a complete failure. As a fanfic - weak.
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I like the story and characters so far. The one thing that bothers me besides the occasional typo though, is how short and nondescript the smut can be at times. It would also be nice if the humanoid pokémon got a few more lines to describe their appearance.
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