Arnold was a strange child. Not the normal strange, he was too odd even for that. There was something wrong with him. No one could really tell until it was too late. He had become Morbid.
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Honestly, pretty entertaining and mature content even. It's so satisfying to watch main protagonist get upgraded with every piece of info. Thank you for your work 😘. I'm planning to read another one of yours.
This story is amazing at the start. It does everything you'd want in a story about a morbid kid doing morbid things. However, that is just the start. While it does have the harem and smut tag, it is 10x worse than you could have ever imagined. Later on in the story, it becomes hyper focused on explicit scenes and almost never goes away from that. If you're here for an evil protagonist, you got it, but after the first 50-100 chapters, it completely derails and progresses into nothing but some sort of fantasy of being surrounded by women. Read at your own risk.
"Personally, my biggest gripe with your séx scenes if how you tended—at least very much in the earlier chapters—to show us séx scenes of other couples, and even of someone like Heather getting fúcked by 2 other guys, when you had set her up as a love interest in the beginning. While I'm aware it is not actually netorae/cheating/whatever, it still leans in that direction, and it just felt unnecessary. It is not séxy or hot to anyone without a sharing fetish, in my opinion, and dragged the story down a bit for me. Mentioning her having séx with them is one thing, showing explicit scenes of it is something else entirely. My suggestion is stick to séx scenes involving the main character, and leave the rest non-explicit, at least when dealing with potential or past love interests for the MC."
Erind Hartwell, a first-year law student with psychopathic tendencies and an obsessive compulsion to follow an arbitrary set of Rules, tries to live a normal life in a world where superhumans battle eldritch horrors invading minds. Society frowned
Honestly, pretty entertaining and mature content even. It's so satisfying to watch main protagonist get upgraded with every piece of info. Thank you for your work 😘. I'm planning to read another one of yours.
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This story is amazing at the start. It does everything you'd want in a story about a morbid kid doing morbid things. However, that is just the start. While it does have the harem and smut tag, it is 10x worse than you could have ever imagined. Later on in the story, it becomes hyper focused on explicit scenes and almost never goes away from that. If you're here for an evil protagonist, you got it, but after the first 50-100 chapters, it completely derails and progresses into nothing but some sort of fantasy of being surrounded by women. Read at your own risk.
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what Wallabalooza said except
"Personally, my biggest gripe with your séx scenes if how you tended—at least very much in the earlier chapters—to show us séx scenes of other couples, and even of someone like Heather getting fúcked by 2 other guys, when you had set her up as a love interest in the beginning. While I'm aware it is not actually netorae/cheating/whatever, it still leans in that direction, and it just felt unnecessary. It is not séxy or hot to anyone without a sharing fetish, in my opinion, and dragged the story down a bit for me. Mentioning her having séx with them is one thing, showing explicit scenes of it is something else entirely. My suggestion is stick to séx scenes involving the main character, and leave the rest non-explicit, at least when dealing with potential or past love interests for the MC."
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