By Simple_Russian_Boi
Danil met an early end. Death at fourteen from heatstroke is not the best thing that could happen to him, but someone intervened. Someone powerfull, someone dark. The Wanderer found a huge potential for magic in his soul, and like an interested ch
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It's a pretty good story. I liked it very much, and I am looking forward to the following chapters. I like the relatively fresh take on the relationship between the key characters. It is done in a reasonable way, except for how the MC ends up with his new roommate to begin with. That is a bit of a stretch... Still, it's completely acceptable, and we are talking about a naruto story, so logic doesn't necessarily apply here. At least based on how they treated Naruto without any reason in the original one.
Overall: It is enjoyable for now, it can turn into anything from this point. I hope that you focus on the unique parts of the story and won't let it change into an everyday and mostly forgettable naruto fanfic.
Alas that is your part to do. I hope you will have fun in the meantime. Cheers.
Sincerely Yokem.
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Awesome story, I hope the MC has the exact same potential or even surpass Hashirama Senju the 1st Hokage, then catch up the current series.
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