Story is strongly wish fulfilment because system of MC is overpowered and very quickly MC goes from strong to stronger constantly. Nonetheless since it is a fanfic I do not want the dramatic perspective of the original protagonist and this offers a fresh take so it's worth reading. MC has a likable personality so far so that is good as well.

For grammar and writing quality so far there are no issues that would impact my reading experience.

So I recommend this story to anyone looking for a light hearted story related to BTTH and a protagonist that's stronger than the problems he'll face. If that is not your thing you'll not like this.

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Harem-Fan

Status: chapter 28: poison pill condensing technique

Oct 8, 2023

So far the story is not bad compared to many FF of this story.

The MC is likable enough and the system is intresting, but it starts to feel repeditive. I still think its worth the time.

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Dhivael

Status: notice

Jan 26, 2024

Disclaimer: the following represents my perception and thoughts about this novel. Nothing more and nothing less.

Let's get this out of the way: Author is not the original author but "only" the translator. So any translation errors are his (or hers)... The story is not his (or her) fault.

This story is your typical Chinese xanxia novel in which the protagonist gets all the nice things for next to no effort. Collecting women in passing. Though the last part is not too bad in this case. At least he only collects "disciples" so far. But in short: he is collecting all the nice things, the original protagonist would get.

In other words: simple wish fulfillment. There is no depth to this story. No real character development. Nothing unexpected for this kind of novel. There is no danger to the protagonist at all. No challenge for him to overcome. This makes the story kind of bland.

Translation: well... There are some errors. Translated and original names for things get mixed up. And at rare occasions the gender of his first (and only) male disciple.

Tldr: this story is ok "for free". But I would never pay for it, as (in my opinion) even one Dollar/Euro/British Pound is too much for it. Others might think differently. And that's totally fine.

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