As he transmigrates across the continent of Douqi, Gu He takes on the mantle of Alchemy King Gu He and gains an incredible power - the Ten Thousandfold disciple cashback system. This allows him to grant gifts to his disciples, which are then returned ten thousandfold.
"You have gifted Liu Ling the Green Lotus Core Flame, triggering a tenfold return and granting you the mighty Green Lotus Holy Fire!" the system announces as each gift brings Gu He greater power.
After three years of intense training, Xiao Yan returns proudly to the Yunlan Sect, eager to display his newfound strength.
"Don't underestimate this once poor youth!" he warns his former lover Nalan Yanran. "Today I'll show you what a true genius can do!"
But Nalan Yanran just smiles faintly. "Is that so?" she asks, as a terrifying Dou Emperor aura suddenly surges from her.
Shocked, Xiao Yan stammers in disbelief, "How did you become a Dou Emperor powerhouse?"
With an arrogant smile, Nalan Yanran replies, "With my master, anything is possible."
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The story has inconsistencies around chapters 150 and above, sometimes the author exaggerates something and in the next moment he makes it seem trivial. Example when the fight against Guardian Wuhu he claimed that he was Earth class but after Guardian Wuhu lost and was caught suddenly alone he was only Human class. Even Yun Shan's disclosure as Dou Venerate alone is already absurd, because this was seized when Yun Shan first appeared he was even still trapped in the Dou Emperor peak, and suddenly it wasn't until 3 months that he broke through 2 cultivation levels to Dou Venerate, it didn't make sense even with the help of the Soul Hall.
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It may still be early to write a review for this but I am enjoying reading this so far hence I am writing this review.
Story is strongly wish fulfilment because system of MC is overpowered and very quickly MC goes from strong to stronger constantly. Nonetheless since it is a fanfic I do not want the dramatic perspective of the original protagonist and this offers a fresh take so it's worth reading. MC has a likable personality so far so that is good as well.
For grammar and writing quality so far there are no issues that would impact my reading experience.
So I recommend this story to anyone looking for a light hearted story related to BTTH and a protagonist that's stronger than the problems he'll face. If that is not your thing you'll not like this.
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So far the story is not bad compared to many FF of this story.
The MC is likable enough and the system is intresting, but it starts to feel repeditive. I still think its worth the time.
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