Sorry to point this out, but I don't get the feeling, that I am reading a novel or a story. Here are only shortened fictional facts listed. I never get the feeling, that I am inside a tale or that I stand beside the MC fighting for his life/love/whatever. It is more like I am reading a newspaper: Beast killed, check! Beauty saved, check! Herbs planted, check! Harem built,... still to do. In one chapter I read, that MC gained his skill technique whatever. The next chapter starts with 9 years later he mastered everything that was to master and now he's op. wtf? If you don't want to write boring chapters about the MC growing up than don't start as a kid. I vote 2 * because there was a lot of work writing this story to the current point. But, dear autor, if you don't improve your descriptions and make a story out of this documentary, than you will lose your fun writing and it will become too boring to keep reading.

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It's a good start but the story has it's problems. 

The two biggest ones are missing description, non of the character have a description, which is a problem even small description would be nice (like haircolor, height (i.e. Big, small, petite etc.) hairstyle, clothing color or similar)

The second big thing is the missing tension. There is no overarching story that is why sheepmeup said it feels like a documentary everything just happens, there is no tension or pressure on the MC. Simply said there is no goal, such stories always fall flat after a short while.

Edit: The author is currently adressing everything I found lacking and the story gets better every chapter.

Because of that I upgraded my rating to 5 Stars 

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This story feels empty. One of the most interesting stuff in Ast is how MC conquered the beauties, after numerous hardship and smoothtalking he finally succeded in taking the beauties heart and body, so the adult scenes become very satisfying. But in your story it feels empty and bland, the last chapter I read MC still doesnt know about yu he, but the nest chapter she is alread become his bitch... its also the same for his step mother.. sigh.. it doesnt feels good.. 

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I've liked it so far. MC is less hypocritical than Qing Shui was in the AST. It seems the MC's primary focus so far has been sleeping with girls, and I get that was his motivation at first, but I wish he would also focus on fighting and training a bit more too. Learning new fighting techniques and exploring more would be nice. One thing I liked about Qing Shui was that he was truly a jack of all trades and mastered everything, and I was kinda hoping this MC kinda did the same. He has the cooking part down, but there was so much more for him the explore. But I do enjoy this series and hope that it continues. 

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It's a really nice fanfiction I for my part really like it and I am eagerly looking forward how the story will progress. I am rather happy here wasn't any ntr, thanks for the hard work author Sommerscave Over and Out.

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Nice & Comfy 

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