Bleach-system and the drama of otome-games with a genderreversal thing for societal norms going on was looking like a good foundation for several arcs of politics and country-building and stuff.
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Very nice and interesting.
But the storytelling is exceptionally awful. Entire chapters are basically the same sentence in different configurations that are written with some extra unusable and unimportant details for the continuation of the story. I just could not force myself to continue.
The is pretty good. It's good but repetitive. You just use fancy words to describe one thing, Mind that I didn't write it to discourage or ment the story's bad, But 😕 the passages are of not desired quality it's repetitive. You can do better in the storytelling/wording But the story's good.
The story isn’t bad but it is falling into the trappings of one thing that I really hate in Chinese novels, repetitious padding. I used to love shadow hack a while ago but that padding thing killed the story for me. An entire chapter can be summed into essentially one paragraph. I’m still reading so I’ll update this if it stops eventually but I hope it does not do the shadow hack thing where the author compensated by dramatically accelerating the pace of the story out of nowhere.
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This is the story of a college student who was reincarnated as a dragon with a near insatiable curiosity. Sparked by questioning his own reinca
Sam was your everyday person, except that he had a job unlike other fanfic protagonists who were unemployed before they were isekai’d.
Sam was a rising actor that wishes to reach the likes of Robert Downey Jr. Or Dwayne the Rock Johns
This story had an interesting premise.
Bleach-system and the drama of otome-games with a genderreversal thing for societal norms going on was looking like a good foundation for several arcs of politics and country-building and stuff.
But the storytelling is exceptionally awful. Entire chapters are basically the same sentence in different configurations that are written with some extra unusable and unimportant details for the continuation of the story. I just could not force myself to continue.
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The is pretty good. It's good but repetitive. You just use fancy words to describe one thing, Mind that I didn't write it to discourage or ment the story's bad, But 😕 the passages are of not desired quality it's repetitive. You can do better in the storytelling/wording But the story's good.
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The story isn’t bad but it is falling into the trappings of one thing that I really hate in Chinese novels, repetitious padding. I used to love shadow hack a while ago but that padding thing killed the story for me. An entire chapter can be summed into essentially one paragraph. I’m still reading so I’ll update this if it stops eventually but I hope it does not do the shadow hack thing where the author compensated by dramatically accelerating the pace of the story out of nowhere.
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Interesting story
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