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Average Words: | 1,049 |
Pages: | 455 |
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This story had an interesting premise.
Bleach-system and the drama of otome-games with a genderreversal thing for societal norms going on was looking like a good foundation for several arcs of politics and country-building and stuff.
But the storytelling is exceptionally awful. Entire chapters are basically the same sentence in different configurations that are written with some extra unusable and unimportant details for the continuation of the story. I just could not force myself to continue.
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The is pretty good. It's good but repetitive. You just use fancy words to describe one thing, Mind that I didn't write it to discourage or ment the story's bad, But 😕 the passages are of not desired quality it's repetitive. You can do better in the storytelling/wording But the story's good.
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The story isn’t bad but it is falling into the trappings of one thing that I really hate in Chinese novels, repetitious padding. I used to love shadow hack a while ago but that padding thing killed the story for me. An entire chapter can be summed into essentially one paragraph. I’m still reading so I’ll update this if it stops eventually but I hope it does not do the shadow hack thing where the author compensated by dramatically accelerating the pace of the story out of nowhere.
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Interesting story
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