If you don't like how violent and abusive the FMC is and how spineless the MC is after reading just a few chapters, then don't bother continuing and just drop this immediately. The Author says to not drop this novel until you've reached chapter 16 but literally no character development happens in chapter 16. Even after the MC almost died to his wife and he got some dreams that should've enlightened him on how bad his situation is, he still acts like absolutely nothing happened and the wife just ends up abusing him again. Basically if you only like yanderes because of how cute they are, then this is definitely not for you and me 😂 The only positive thing about the FMC is that she portrays what an actual yandere and abusive wife would look like in real life. I'd rate this like a 2.5 stars because even though I didn't enjoy reading this novel at all, the quality of the writing is still good. However, I'm still dropping a one star rating because of how high the current rating is and the MC and FMC are just really not likeable at all.

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Very good story. I hope it doesn't go into hiatus. 

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Genuinely one of my favorite novels on here feels believable and actually comes across as a real yandere wife. Edit:The one star review is dumb literally not a real criticism it's just not his cup of tea just read something else I personally enjoy this

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This is.. Kinda interesting. Ok so. Author. I have two pieces of advices for you. 

Number one: reduce the number of cuss words, Jesus. It feels like when u are tryna prescribe the flow of the chapter's story narration, you just keep adding insults in order to make it feel intense. But it actually doesn't feel intense. Instead it feels like a family guy gag, or a hazbin hotel episode. A great youtuber once said this " insults should be kept at minimum, if you can express the same/similar intensity of emotions without the cuss words." Instead, in my opinion, keep the cuss words for the height of a chapter/episode. It creates a more impactful punch. And thus resulting in a more lasting effect. You can restrict yourself to a rule of like 1 cuss word every 3 chappies (cuz u are posting small chapters). You know something similar happened in breaking bad. The producers were restricted by the tv studio to have only one cuss word per season. Thus, breaking bad used to build up towards that one cuss word.

2nd: kinda a nitpick, but try to flesh out the wife's character, and the husband's character. This just seems like a straight foward relationship where le bad woman beat up her le weak pu**y husband (see just one insult in this entire comment). An abusive isn't ever this simple. There are usually multiple things tying the couple together. The wife's abuse can't just be just one factor that is forcing the husband to say "bye bye". 

Ok

Bye

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I don't know why you don't like it. I think it's pretty good. each character possesses their own story. Even though the story revolves around the MC, it also covers a wide range of scenarios and different stories. Each character is drawn vividly. You keep complaining about the FL, but the Yandere is a trait hers, and the MC being bold and trying to be free is also an MC trait that gives this story a twist. It's pretty hard to come up with ideas for a romantic novel, so thanks to the author.

Some 18-year-old boys keep complaining because there is no harem. They like the MC to have relations with every woman they see and  ....... Every woman he meets.

So please, grow up.

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This is awful. It feels like a young teen's interpretation of an incredibly abusive relationship. There's no payoff. The author says it 'gets better' at chapter 16, it doesn't. If this weren't so poorly written I would almost think it's some kind of character study of a traumatized man in an abusive relationship. As it stands though, this novel is just two terrible characters badly written into a relationship that made me legitimately cringe many, many times, even after it supposedly 'got better.'

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