The story is alright while the pacing is a bit fast with years passing like nothing and that the MC doesn't far many conflicts (Which will likely be fixed outside of Konoha) outside of his self inflected stupid brain. The side characters are basically nonexistent in the story outside of the MC, mito and fem-Sasuke (I don't mind this you should add the side characters in a bit more to flesh out the world like gai helps a lot but doesn't say a word like he is a book you found rather than a person in the world.) The spell is ok but does seem to have mistakes which are common as a write auto-corrects these mistakes in their mind but are usually pointed out by viewers so it is a nice novel to consume in large amounts but not overly unique in concept but not a basic bitch one either.
Aurora was a renowned physicist but her career came to an abrubt end at the hands of an accident. Now she has been shoved to a world she somewhat know. Using the boons brought by the accident follow her as she takes full advantage of her knowledge
You should know how it goes, I died, met a ROB, got some wishes, before getting reincarnated in a world of my choosing.
Let’s get started shall we?
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In case you didn’t realise, this is a Tensura Slime f
The story is alright while the pacing is a bit fast with years passing like nothing and that the MC doesn't far many conflicts (Which will likely be fixed outside of Konoha) outside of his self inflected stupid brain. The side characters are basically nonexistent in the story outside of the MC, mito and fem-Sasuke (I don't mind this you should add the side characters in a bit more to flesh out the world like gai helps a lot but doesn't say a word like he is a book you found rather than a person in the world.) The spell is ok but does seem to have mistakes which are common as a write auto-corrects these mistakes in their mind but are usually pointed out by viewers so it is a nice novel to consume in large amounts but not overly unique in concept but not a basic bitch one either.
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Man I love this fanfic so please dont drop it, plzz
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