- Is this the END!? hope notDec 23, 2020
- -Chapter: 18 Empty bottleOct 22, 2020
- -Chapter: 17 iris win arkiteOct 7, 2020
- -Chapter: 16 the Magic ExamSep 12, 2020
- -Chapter: 15 Vivi dragged us off to buy foodSep 6, 2020
- Chapter: 14 DepartureAug 30, 2020
- -Chapter: 13 Hunting!Jul 1, 2020
- -Chapter: 12 DisappearedJun 25, 2020
- -Side Chapter: ??? A Tale…Jun 22, 2020
- -Side Chapter: A1 Apple’s confessionJun 20, 2020
- -Chapter: 11 An Alter Ego (Tina pt.2)Jun 16, 2020
- -Chapter: 10 A sword (Tina pt. 1)Jun 16, 2020
- -Chapter: 9 Run away from Sharon (Kris pt. 2)Jun 14, 2020
- -Chapter: 8 The ‘Training’ she said (Kris pt. 1)Jun 12, 2020
- -Chapter: 7 Years pass quicklyJun 11, 2020
Edit: Chapter 11. The grammar has gotten better so I'm gonna raise the rating a star.
Interesting concept flawed execution.
There are really only 2 things dragging this story down (the second is a personal preference) for me.
1. The grammar is absolutely awful. You CAN understand it but this really does feel like a bad fan translation.
2. It's written like a generic Japanese web novel. Meaning there is very little detail, the MC is super OP far before any conflict happens, and basically all the other tropes applicable are likely to appear. (We already have a siscon and cute childhood friend, though we don't know if any romance will happen with either.)
The twist on the genre is essentially that the MC has 2 bodies from birth with complete control of them.
Also by chapter 9 MC is like 6 so... If you don't like slow paced stories with OP MCs from infancy probably skip this. I'll continue since my second negative isn't enough to make me drop it unless the story ends up complete trash or I hate the MC.
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If I had to use only one sentence:"An aura of joy and happiness"Well here's a brief summary, it's a story of a teenage boy being reincarnated into another world filled with magic, the plot twist here is... he got reincarnated as two girls, twins to be exact, think of it as him housing two bodies with duplicate souls.
What makes it fun to read, firstly it shares a lot of joyful moments, this is more of a comedy read. It also show some siscon moments, no I'm serious, hugging while in bed, dressing up, well there will be many more to come perhaps so you should be more hopeful. As I said, "An aura of joy and happiness".I've said the positive things, now on to the negatives. I'm not one to boast in having great capitalization but the thing is, lots of the content, no most of it, has errors in capitalization which can be hopefully ignored when compared to others who misspell words. There's also that weird personality of the main character,
although he was a teenage boy he acts a lot like a girl, in fact he openly accepts being dressed up as one and never bothered changing back to his boyish attire nor pleaded to have one to his/her parents
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Very interesting concept and a great read so far.
There are some spelling mistakes, but nothing that makes it unreadable.
Looking forward to see how the story will turn out.
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