V4C20 I LOVE IT! I can feel that the end is coming soon! But it has been one hell of a journey. I cant wait for more. Still 5 Stars in my books. READ IT

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V4C6: I never thought I would be saying this about a fanfic but this is turning out to be a very original story in itself. There is no way to predict what is happening and more so has taken a totally different approach to any other fanfic I have seen. I cant wait to see the story tell of its own secrets in the one-piece universe,

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I am very happy to write a review about this book. I love the original works of One Piece. I started reading fanfic's to see other takes on the story and I must say a lot of them are too Isekai's with an amazing set up from the get-go. I am not saying they are bad but this book takes a different approach, takes you on a journey with the main character as he grows, learns and hopefully change the world around him. 

Up to Volume 2 Chapter 23, I would recommend this to One Piece lovers to have a read. 

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I really enjoy this story, as I prefer main characters that use their head. Ezra is not without flaws obviously, he is still naive about the ways of the World Government, but that will likely soon change. He also isn't the lone-wolf type and actually trains his crew unlike some other stories. 

Definitely looking forward to more chapters.

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Okay, since this fic is written for fun, it doesn't need to be serious.

The idea of this fic is interesting and it is mostly original since the story has been deviated a lot from the canon. The MC, Ezra, did make several big impacts to the world.

The story is written in a simple format, so for those who expect deep inner thought of the MC, deep character character development or other characters reaction, this is not a story for you. But as I said before, this fic is written for fun by the author so it is fine to be simple.

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Ahhh I thought this was fanfic but no it was not it was like an original story, like original, I love this story, and Ezra's character is cool, well I don't know what to say anymore, but one thing I must say, this fanfic is amazing

Thank you Author for this lovely work of art, kiss kiss muah muah  ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡

ps- this is my first time writing a review so bear with it, and my first language is not English, so if u see a wrong grammatically sentence or word just don't mind it, and btw still waiting for the next chapter uwu, okay peace ✌️

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I thought about giving it a 4 but gave a 3. Out of the few One Piece fanfics I tried, I think this was the best so far. Though the writing felt kinda bland, it didn't feel amateurish like most Newbie writers.

Though as stated in the synopsis, this story does break the laws of One Piece, this is kinda the exact reason it didn't feel that great to me. However, up to where I read which wasn't even that far (5chaps), it has been constant training type arcs, so hence, there's kinda been a lack of real main plot as right now it's a setup to make him op and info dump development.

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This review is a medium for people who are still unsatisfied with the synopsis and are deciding whether to read the novel or not.

The novel is one of the best one-piece fanfic out there. No system, no cheats, no big ass plot armour.

The story is smooth and had no big plotholes. Grammar is also mostly on point.

The start of the story is mostly based on cannon but after around half war volume 2 it deviates slightly off cannon as a result of actions performed by the MC (which have their bases and has not been pulled out of his ass by the author).

Worldbuilding (since is one-piece fanfic) - 5/5

Chapter development- 4/5- proper development of not just MC but also the supporting characters.

Story - 3.8/5- I personally think there is a couple of things especially in volume 3 that could have been a bit different as seemed a bit forced/rushed. But that is my personal opinion and I doubt will affect any readers experience of the novel. And this is not an excuse that should may anyone not read the novel.

Execution- 3.5/5- The ideas behind the novel are greatly executed. But if I had to find out any complaint then it would be that the pace of the novel can be a bit baster sometimes (i am talking about the time skips XD). Again not an excuse not to read the novel, it is just my personal opinion.

In the end, I will say that if you are a fan of one-piece and are looking for more content, then this is some more in form of good fanfic.

Now go and read it.

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The protagonist is OP, but which protagonist isn't nowadays I give it 4 knifes out of 5 as he is somewhat likeable. And I enjoyed reading it.

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