Hakaru’s life wasn’t great. His family was broken with a cheating father, a drunk mother, and a slutty sister. The one thing he had going for him was his best friend and his beautiful girl. That all came crashing down when he found her cheating on him. Thus, he committed suicide, only to find death stolen from him by the Goddess of theft, Netori. She’s enlisted him into her own personal game, NTR Crush, where a player can gain strange abilities and skills as long as they can take the women that belong to other men. This is a game where you steal every thing you want, or you lose everything you have. Let the game begin.
Disclaimer: This story contains NTR. If you have severe negative reactions to any netorare (albeit with an inevitable satisfying payoff), I recommend you pass on this novel. Consider yourself warned.
- EpilogueFeb 14, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 27Feb 7, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 26Jan 31, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 25Jan 24, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 24Jan 17, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 23Jan 10, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 22Jan 3, 2023
- Volume 7 – Chapter 21Dec 27, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 20Dec 20, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 19Dec 13, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 18Dec 6, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 17Nov 29, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 16Nov 22, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 15Nov 15, 2022
- Volume 7 – Chapter 14Nov 8, 2022
- Content Warning
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The Title says it all.. all NTR. You better not read if your not pervert enough. I regret reading this..
MC is stupid, hypocrite. Some girls hide secrets from him with no valid reason at all.. they could have told him from the start... I thought I felt better bcoz there is netori, but somehow NTR won it all.
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Well, I made it to Volume 2 Chapter 10 before I couldn't handle it anymore. Then I went back and read the reviews of the story. I really wish I had read the reviews first! The reviews are not exaggerated in the least. Take my advice and look for another story unless you like feeling angry, depressed, and annoyed as you read.
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Really author? No character development until here. The MC is really indecisive and doesn't really think the bigger picture even he always said he sees the "bigger picture" hahaha this story really in a nutshell! Yep, I agree to those who says to stay away from this novel if you are weaksh*t. Well you can read this if you want the MC to suffer and that's the trick here to not get hurt that badly 😂
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this story will never be good or anything else for a simple reason, the feeling of victory is not as pleasant as to heal the pain you receive when reading the error. I would be lying if I said that it didn't hurt a bit but I'm used to almost everything even if I hate it, but not everyone is mentally strong enough not to have repercussions so this novel is definitely not for everyone and a lot will believe hate inside himself for no reason... this novel also makes me think how sick the author is but I don't really care much hahaha
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I will start with the good, then comes the bad and finally my explanation why I think this deserves such a low rating.
Good:
Writing: The writing is acceptable. It is on the level you should demand of someone making money with their writing. As could be expected, it's not Shakespeare, but no one is here in search of Shakespeare. We are all looking for the literary equivalent of fast food. So, this portion of fries will not be the best or among the best you ever had, but you will not get a stomache ache from them.
s*x scenes: I would declare them, if they actually involve the MC for once, easily the best part of this story. If they don't involve the MC, they feel more like they were put there for the shock value.
Misery Porn: If you enjoy misery porn, you can get something out of this. The story seems to delight in going into this area repeatingly.
Bad:
Characters: It's hard to find even one remotely likeable character in the story. I will go over the main ones.
MC: The main character is a horrible mixture of the worst qualities of a general NTR victim paired with the worst qualities of a NTR perpetrator. He is weak-willed, dense, stupid, fragile, scatterbrained, naive, easily manipulated and at the same time an unrepenting rapist with a string of horrible deeds to his name.
But the worst thing is his utterly inconsistent nature, in one paragraph he may make a personal resolution to then go back on it in a paragraph down the page. I'm nearly at the half point of the story and it feels like the character experienced no growth at all. There is no character development. He could be taken from the third volume to be dropped back into the first and there would only be marginal differences.
Instead of the character maturing, learning from his mistakes and coming into his own, he is constantly brought back to the start of the story. So, instead of learning to appreciate the MC through his growth from the pathetic human being into someone more likeable, we get the cheap trick that plays on the reader's empathy to give the MC some sympathy.
FMC: Tbh, I didn't realize Netori was to be the female lead till later on, she felt more like an antagonist than an actual love interest. But she shares the same qualities as her fellow leads. They are all shallow, weak-minded, easily manipulated... well to make the MC being able to manipulate or steal them they simply have to be worse than him and that should tell you everything.
There is no corruption or courting process in this story, every female is a bitch and whore from the start and the only connection they share with the MC is s*x. I think NTR doujinshi have an equal amount of characterization as these females have. Two to three panels with information, and then comes the s*x train. s*x is literally the connecting factor and the glue for every relationship. It's so pathetic.
Antagonists: Every antagonist was essentially a hate sink. They have nothing to them except that you can easily hate them. Most of their powers, skills and accomplishments feel like complete author fiat and rely on the MC holding the idiot ball with both hands. Worst of all, their comeuppance is never even close to equal to the pain they get to inflict or the limelight and victories they get.
All the antagonists are established through victories against the MC, which is a horrible conceptual idea. Instead of using a well-established trope like the worf effect, the story continues to push the protagonist back to the starting line, again and again. Finally, they lose through complete handwaverism.
Other characters: I don't think one genuinely good human being was given any mention in this story. It feels like male characters only exist to either be rapist or be even worse human beings than the MC to make him look better. And females are just there to get f**ked.
Plot: The initial premise and hook of the story is a clear-cut revenge storyline. MC got hurt, MC gets system, MC plans to get revenge.
It's a clear-cut bait and switch here. The premise and hook is thrown away as quickly as possible and the actual story takes it place.
The story is about the MC getting cucked and showing how miserable he is to then somehow "win" in the end. The win is always not the result of careful planning or actual power difference or any other reasonable course of action, but pure plot armor. MC wins, because it's the end of the volume, and he has to win. The first volume literally ends with him luckily hitting the kink of his ex-girlfriend and through this lucky incident gaining the upper hand over his former best friend. Of course, this explanation is then spoon-fed to the reader through Netori.
The story runs in circles along the same path again and again. The MC is cuckolded and his partners are stolen from him, he hits an emotional low-point to then swears to get better. Finally, through some luck and circumstances out of his hand and planning he succeeds. Rinse and repeat.
No love interest or girl ever stays loyal to him and all of them get f**ked by one antagonist after the other. Even after he claimed them, conquered their heart or whatever other requirement is put on them. They still cheat on him happily.
Each victory of the MC comes to feel like a Pyrrhic or even Cadmean victory instead of a real one.
The revenge arc always falls flat and many plot threads established in one volume get dropped or completely forgotten in the next one.
His best friend is near completely ignored in Volume 1. There is no comeuppance for the guy, no revenge, no gloating, nothing. There is no explanation why he (Derek) lets the situation go on, when he is literally to be made out to be a typical player. Why
Every plot thread made in the school is put on the side in volume 2. The rumors of MC raping someone, gone. The males who raped his ex-girlfriend, gone. And so on.
Revenge is also exclusively centered around the male antagonists, and the female part in all of it is generally completely ignored. There are no hard feelings on the side of the MC and he happily takes each and every lying, cheating bitch or whore back into his good graces. Sounds pathetic?
Instead of any one of them suffering or getting revenge on them, the MC seemingly forms far stronger connections to them than he had before. It's mind-boggling how he can describe someone as a whore, cock-sleeve or disgusting piece of meat to then pine after them in the next moment.
They just get to cheat and hurt him in the next volume XD. And that's literally what happens.
Just to become his loved ones in the end.
I skipped ahead to look, if it is worth it to battle through the story.
It's not. The story takes a nose dive towards complete whack territory and was wrapped up in a completely unsatisfying manner like every other volume.
Conclusion: The story gains attention with a false hook and refuses to deliver on the premise it provided. Instead, it goes on a tangent of misery porn, helped on by authorial induced stupidity, and in the end turns into complete whack territory. This story is a worse version of the game Dark Hero Party. If you like ntr and desire something better, play that instead.
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It started with interesting plots, but as the story progresses, nonsense things appear and with each volume it increases in a forced way in recycling silly characters. Where the mother is drunk and stupid with her husband cheating on her and from one moment to the next she is a yakuza boss in the past?. Those nonsensical points should be improved and this story could improve its rating.
My English is not my natural language, but I felt the need to leave my comment. If you like NTR, why do you like this undervalued genre? Let me tell you that in each volume you will feel disappointed and if you are just spending time, you can read it..
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