It's decent.

Plot: 7/10 

 -It depends to your preference though. If you're into heavy action, there are some here but it's not that heavy here. It's not the main focus after all.

-This leans heavier in the romance plot. It's tagged with harem and there are currently 4+ love interests but he only got together with one so far.

-Mafia and gang elements involved. Crimes and explicit content are included. 

Characters: 9/10

-There are a diversity of personalities. You would like some, you will hate some. Some will annoy you but you still root for them.

-Each characters have their own goals and act like an individual person's with their individual stories. 

-The interaction and relationship of the characters are some of the interesting I read here. (It's just me though so it's still up to others.

Writing Quality: 8/10

-There are some grammatical and spelling error but I can let that slide. I don't even notice it sometimes.

-Update speed would be nice if it's increases.

-It would also be good if the pacing speeds up a bit but maybe I'm just used to fast paced cultivation novels. It's a matter of preference in this regard.

Overall: 9/10

-I won't say it's the best but it's not bad either.

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good. de. cent enough to read. Not a bad read. Especially good for those that like crazy romance with crazy women. Harem and incest seems to be a subplot tho. Not sure If those siblings will cook the rice or it could just be a sub plot. read at ur own risks... there were r18 elements involved.. if you're a snowflake, fvck off for your own peace

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Currently, it's still good.

The pacing is kind of quick but it's presently good overall.

This story showed the element of gang so I think there would be underworld related events here.

I also like the emotional and psychological description of the characters.

The word count is long with an average of 5K which is the reason that causes the pacing to be fast, I think.

However, the author said in one of his note that she or he will revise it.

I saw that he already started shortening his word count.

Edit: came back after 2+ years and the quality improved a lot. The characters became better and their interactions feel genuine. It's honestly what's intriguing in this series. It looks like the story will revolve around relationships. 

Edit: Volume 1 eh? I guess there would be more. 

Edit: Omg a troll review. Check their profile and you'll see this guy likes to troll. Just read the story. Reviews including mine are vague and subjective anyway.

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This is kinda slw paced probably because the author is trying to keep things in mystery. Considering that it's currently in the first book, they probably don't want to reveal too much lest they accidentally reveal some stuff that should not be seen yet but I'm fine with it. I only come back from time to time anyway. But anyway this story is overall good. It begins with a slice of life element but then gangs got involved in the Early chapters but they're still not the main focus. What I like the most is the relationship dynamics. And I believe that's the main plot of the story rather than mafia and sh*ts. I mean Mark spent most of the chapters wooing his girlfriend back. I don't know what's wrong in the head of that girl but I understand the trauma... I just don't like how she thinks. Hope there's a  character development. Although it's harem, it's not like most harem outthere where the girls all somehow flock to the MC.. at least here, there's struggle... but daym, the characters have depth and the interactions felt real.. Keep up the good work author. I whope this series isn't dropped..

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This story reads like a bad Chinese language machine translation. It is readable, just really janky. It has terrible grammar and syntax which kills any immersion or enjoyment from reading. To have to re-read something two or three times to parse what's said or extrapolate the meaning from earlier paragraphs is frustrating. The author keeps commenting that he will edit the chapters when someone points it out yet the story is two years old and not one chapter has been edited or has any of the issues helpfully pointed out in the comments been rectified.  

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