It is the year 2199, the end of the 22nd century. Due to a biopocalypse unleashed by a certain genetic engineer, all life on the planet evolved at incredible speeds, but humans couldn't keep up so they built walled cities. The story follows a certain clone trying to find its place.
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Sorry for asking a weird question, but who is the MC of this novel???
The world description, characters, and words are all very good but this novel lacks the MC, there are too many POVs of different characters and I don't know who the MC is because he doesn't appear much in the novel.
Is the MC (clone) Eric? Why is he so fuzzy as a mass character? The other supporting characters have even more highlights than the lackluster MC. The story needs to focus more on the MC.
After chapter 100 the content of the novel got better, the story began to focus more on the MC.
5/5
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The plot is very good, VERY high potential. Sadly, there are plenty of typos and grammatical errors. But the most glaring problem of the entire novel is: stupidity. The way the author try to make people look smart: he makes everyone else dumb. So, when the MC or another character, as the other reviewer said, there are a lot of PoV, say something that is not smart, but a conclusion based on facts or not even that, they all praise the character. It's ridiculous. There are other problems, for example the thoughts that are clearly fake, to the point of cringe, to explain things to the reader. Several repetition. Plot holes, like:
when they go out with the Scions, the guards all disappear when they are in danger or fighting, and I mean for their life, but reappears at the end to guard for the night.
Is not a spoiler relevant to the plot.
But the most glaring problem, as I said, is how stupid some situation or phrase are, especially when made by people that are described with "her eyes showed intelligence in their deep." Literally something like that...
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