The story seems interesting and with potential although there has still some issues. The characters are not perfect, there is very little inner monologue, but they are still quite fleshed out. 

The system is a bit random, it's just there to give the MC some power, it doesn't appear to be OP, but is still too early to tell. The main reason is that it's a gatcha system, sh*t can gone down fast with this type of system. 

The smut tag is a bit excessive right now, since while there are s*x scenes they are very short and mostly just mentioned. It seems only the major scenes will be described, such as first time with a character or different and  special occasions (threesome, playing a role like dominant etc.).

All that said, I'm still giving 4 four stars because the story is good, I'm only pointing out some issues.

The grammar is very good, best you can find in ScribbleHub.

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Recommended this to all my pals, a hidden gem of a fanfic for sure.

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One of the few RSM that starts good into very good, objectively it's 4.5/5, the societal difference that challenges his mindset made it entertaining, especially his way of approach with how similar the fairer gender acts as men of our world, then again... I wonder how the world of remnant differs from ours because one thing for certain is that alimony shouldn't be that bad.

not when it is filled with monsters that removes such complacency in their society 

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