The story seems interesting and with potential although there has still some issues. The characters are not perfect, there is very little inner monologue, but they are still quite fleshed out.
The system is a bit random, it's just there to give the MC some power, it doesn't appear to be OP, but is still too early to tell. The main reason is that it's a gatcha system, sh*t can gone down fast with this type of system.
The smut tag is a bit excessive right now, since while there are s*x scenes they are very short and mostly just mentioned. It seems only the major scenes will be described, such as first time with a character or different and special occasions (threesome, playing a role like dominant etc.).
All that said, I'm still giving 4 four stars because the story is good, I'm only pointing out some issues.
The grammar is very good, best you can find in ScribbleHub.
One of the few RSM that starts good into very good, objectively it's 4.5/5, the societal difference that challenges his mindset made it entertaining, especially his way of approach with how similar the fairer gender acts as men of our world, then again... I wonder how the world of remnant differs from ours because one thing for certain is that alimony shouldn't be that bad.
not when it is filled with monsters that removes such complacency in their society
Jean Grey’s soul is fused with one’s of a recently deceased female geek who knows her marvel lore, as she realizes that she was in the Marvel universe, this new Jean Grey takes her destiny in hand to escape her dire fate.
I will
A high school girl who was a chuuni dead by a truck because saving a kid who god deemed as an important figure in the future. The god then grants her a wish due to her heroic act of saving the so called important figure. And that wish is…
We associate many things with the word “time.”
When time comes we are born.
With time we learn new words, we grow.
Over time, we fall in love and give new life.
However, when our time is up we die.
I died
Feelings towards a psychopath are similar to walking on a broken mirror.
Once you decide to step on it, you have to carefully place your steps to avoid falling on sharp shards at the same time don’t let the broken mirror break under yo
Kara lived the first part of her life entirely unaware she had once been someone else. but, after failling to escape from krypton, the trauma of getting trapped in a ship makes her fully remember her previous life.
Now she must strugle with
The story seems interesting and with potential although there has still some issues. The characters are not perfect, there is very little inner monologue, but they are still quite fleshed out.
The system is a bit random, it's just there to give the MC some power, it doesn't appear to be OP, but is still too early to tell. The main reason is that it's a gatcha system, sh*t can gone down fast with this type of system.
The smut tag is a bit excessive right now, since while there are s*x scenes they are very short and mostly just mentioned. It seems only the major scenes will be described, such as first time with a character or different and special occasions (threesome, playing a role like dominant etc.).
All that said, I'm still giving 4 four stars because the story is good, I'm only pointing out some issues.
The grammar is very good, best you can find in ScribbleHub.
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Recommended this to all my pals, a hidden gem of a fanfic for sure.
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One of the few RSM that starts good into very good, objectively it's 4.5/5, the societal difference that challenges his mindset made it entertaining, especially his way of approach with how similar the fairer gender acts as men of our world, then again... I wonder how the world of remnant differs from ours because one thing for certain is that alimony shouldn't be that bad.
not when it is filled with monsters that removes such complacency in their society
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