Author needs a proofreader and some editing for the early chapters, I'm not going to continue so I can't comment about the more recent chapters.
The concept is interesting (maybe? Not sure I understand it all), but the story feels like MTL, and is hard to understand. Verbs don't always fit, pronouns change every other sentence (MC refers to himself as us and you in thought? Really?), and author confuses inner monologue and dialogues every so often, making for a subpar reading experience...
Pretty good if forced cliche semi incest romance wasn't here, but since it is here, 2 stars. If you don't mind japanese boobfall levels of story writing, you will enjoy this.
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Synopsis:
Keith, a
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Author needs a proofreader and some editing for the early chapters, I'm not going to continue so I can't comment about the more recent chapters.
The concept is interesting (maybe? Not sure I understand it all), but the story feels like MTL, and is hard to understand. Verbs don't always fit, pronouns change every other sentence (MC refers to himself as us and you in thought? Really?), and author confuses inner monologue and dialogues every so often, making for a subpar reading experience...
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Pretty good if forced cliche semi incest romance wasn't here, but since it is here, 2 stars. If you don't mind japanese boobfall levels of story writing, you will enjoy this.
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