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In a trading and touring company an office worker suddenly startled with panic in his eyes and sweat beads on his forehead.
But he calmed down immediately by his nature that he cultivated for a long time.
He made an excuse and left the office that day to return back to his apartment.
“So I have died after 16 years of surviving in the apocalypse because of that bitch Nisha and bastard Roy.
That bitch Nisha even took my space pendent as if she already knows about it in advance.
Also all the opportunities that I got were taken by them.
My love is wasted on her.
I still got a year of time before the disasters started with scorching hear, floods, rains, volcanic bursts, tsunami, acid rains, plant and animal mutation, zombies…..
This did not end as the earth moved to apocalypse land which is its origin.
For all this I require food, water, weapons, supplies, and many things….
Since I have returned again I will take care of those bastards hehe.
The pendent seems to be damaged it needs repairing….”
- noticeDec 18, 2024
- NoticeSep 2, 2024
- Chapter 150: the thoughts of the womenJan 4, 2024
- Chapter 149: melting snow (Happy New Year)Jan 1, 2024
- Chapter 148: sudden extreme temperature 65 degreesDec 29, 2023
- Chapter 147: the wasteland of the apocalypse landDec 27, 2023
- Chapter 146: trench channel digging startedDec 22, 2023
- Chapter 145: high fluctuations in the temperatureDec 20, 2023
- Chapter 144: search for the progenitor’s descendentsDec 18, 2023
- Chapter 143: monster tree huntDec 15, 2023
- Chapter 142: the suspicion of descendents of the progenitorsDec 13, 2023
- Chapter 141: the 7 key holders have metDec 11, 2023
- Chapter 140: you can come to my cave base with other key holdersDec 8, 2023
- Chapter 139: you are the one that taught me disguise technique right?Dec 6, 2023
- Chapter 138: entering into the four faced city.Dec 4, 2023
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- 75 dropped
I don't think the story is bad at all, skipped ahead to see the general outline of the story which seemed fine but the glaring hole is the grammar and structure single sentence statements over and over. The combo makes it hard to digest. I think the first thing author could work on is instead of MC talked to person or MC talked to his girls show those conversations don't just say those conversations happened actually write it out. Best of luck would love to see later down the road a rewrite because I could absolutely see improvement in writing in most current chapters.
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Good idea, solid execution, and as weird as it is to say about a magic apocalypse with systems: very down to earth.
MC is cautious, calm, and collected, with little reliance on plot armor. And MC shares powerups with the harem equally, which I really love to see.
I enjoyed it, but it does not really match my tastes enough to go past chapter 190 for me.
I like a little hot bloodedness in romance, and that is rare to find here. And while the relationship is there, its missing some tender 'romantic' moments. Also, I would say it isn't really smut, s*x scenes are rare and not really described in detail after the first.
Additionally, I like a more clear-cut power system, but after 190 chapters I have no idea who or what the MC can take in a fight.
So, good story, give it a try if you like down to earth adventure/survival in a magical apocalypse
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I will be sincere in the respective to this novel, although it is true that the writing style is not the best and that I wish there were many more conversations, the story itself compensates, I'll explain myself, I have read dozens of novels whether fics, books, western novels, Japanese, etc. And after reading this story I must recognize that the author is very good in this sense, so I send a big greeting to the author and encourage him to continue writing this wonderful story.
While it is true that many criticize it, you should not be discouraged, because from my point of view, those people do not value the effort behind each chapter, so I encourage you to ignore those people and move on, you may at times want to stop writing, but you must remember that there will always be people like me who like your story and who are willing to read new chapters, a greeting and cheer up.
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The summary of the story sounds nice and appealing. The execution on the other hand is poor. I don't believe that the author is a native English speaker. When reading this, many of the sentences are incomplete and for me it really disrupts anything the author tries to covey about the story. I read some of the ore recent chapters and there has been improvement in the author's writing but there is enough inconsistencies that take me out of the story. This feels more like machine translation than just playing writing in english.
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