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Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
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the story has 300 chapters please read it at my patreon page

https://www.patreon.com/Fatenovels

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I did not own some of the world settings, but the remaining is all my own creation.

In any world there is no villain or protagonist instead there are people with various levels of luck and opportunities.

The final winner among them becomes a hero or the protagonist while the remaining people that became the stepping stones for the protagonist become the villains.

The villains are actually formed because of the mistakes of the so called good and peace loving people.

…………..

A good man that was darkened by the seemingly good people became a villain.

Finally after achieving his goals of revenge on the society he died happily while the people that killed him only has despair because of the after math.

When he opened his eyes he was already 2 years old kid that got his head bumped.

Most probably he died at that time and the soul of this villain replaced the kid.

The most shocking thing is that there is a strange creature taking care of him.

He has seen this creature in a movie in his previous life.

Can’t villain see a movie with his mistress?

This should be Kreacher.

Immediately the memories of the kid returned to his mind.

Immediately he understood he is the son of Sirius black and Mary Goldsman.

He is called Jonathan black.

He is currently in the black house under the care of his grandmother Walburga Black a pure blood enthusiast.

“Ding, congratulations host you have obtained the villain choice system.”

“Please make your first choice.

Option 1: Push the blame of your injury to Draco Malfoy; you will be rewarded with 1000 gold Galleons.

Option 2: push the blame to Crabbe and Goyle; you will receive +2 percent critical hit in everything you wanted.”

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AdultAdventureFanfictionFantasyHaremLitRPGMatureSmutSupernatural
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    zeze50k
    Status: chapter 46: the secret of ancestry...

    please leave this story only in the world of harry potter. 

    I don't care if he gets powers from other worlds of fiction, but he doesn't want to go to other worlds to increase his harem, there are already many stories like that out there and I don't want this to become another copy of it. 

    I'm really enjoying the story so far (c46) keep up the good work.

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    Titivillus
    Status: chapter 109: peek a booh

    The autor barely writes english, not comparable to machine translations but its close. The MC is uninteresting he is a villain for the sake of It, you can do that but at least make it fun to read, for us to wish to praise his intelect and how he makes everyone a fool. The autor also express that eventually the MC will need to leave HP world when the title of the book makes this universe the main point of this story.

     The story is a sequence of narrations about whats the MC is doing, but mostly is not descriptive enough to makes us care about whats is happening (basically x happening and them y and after that z and the MC gets another girl that for some reason think he is worth it when he barely shows he wants to be with the girl before most (If not all) of them take the initiative. Barely any dialog for a story full or relationship that for sure would have some drama. Anyway, kinda weak plot.

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    TDM
    Status: chapter 200

    This is a OP protagonist lemon-harem story. It correctly identifies Potter and Weasley as overconfident misled hero-wannabe morons, Hermoine as an academic with more loyalty and plot-armor than real-world good sense, and Dumbledore as a manipulative plotter at best (arguably sociopathic villain). It has fun with the fact that the Harry Potter world is absolutely hypocritically duplicitous, power-driven and unbalanced.  I think the story does a good job with Potter wish-fulfillment including magical creature empowerment, but could benefit by toning down the harem elements (only a select few want to read a story where over half the action is harem management and repetitious smut). Author seems not to be a native english speaker, which might bother some, but the story is not difficult to read or follow (better than I could produce in any second language).  Keep with this writing author!!!

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    Fost
    Status: chapter 62: another good material for...

    The plot itself and the ideas the author has are good, but it is let down by the appalling English, to the point where as interested as I am in finding out how this story might end I cannot continue with how difficult it is to read. The "choice  system" is also a bit broken, often the choice is binary between something good/obvious and bad/don't do it. If you can put up with the writing quality you might enjoy this, but I no longer can.

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    rickayelm
    Status: chapter 4: deceive walburga black

    This book is annoying and almost painful to read. The formatting is terrible, and the villain system is set up to force him to make stupid decisions.

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    dJava
    Status: chapter 38: christmas dinner with nicolas...

    This "choice system" was just a bullsh*t.

    Its not really a choice, if only given two option, and the other one result in penalties. Or, even if there are more option, the other option doesn't really matter. Or, even if given many "good" option, MC can just easily do all of them. Or, even without choice from system, its an obvious thing that MC would do anyways.

    So yeah, it's not a "choice system" if there is only one obvious option.

    And the "villain" thing was also weird. MC (& maybe the author?) were really obsessed about this villain thing, even though what he really do is just what a normal people do as well.  And he is not even that good about it. Most of it feel like a gimmick.

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    Ziegfreed
    Status: c175

    I did read this far so it doesnt deserve a 1 star, its got something to it.

    The book had an interesting concept, that basically got thrown out the window because our MC is smarter than the system, smarter than everyone in his surroundings, basically he's just super smart. <-90% of the chapters rant about how smart he is. The girls are basically trophies he's collecting just to have a collection of girls, but every few chapters he would say he treats them right, he hardly talks to anyone in his harem basically just giving them orders and manipulating them then anyone who isn't infatuated with him he has a small monologue about they can make their own choices but that they're wrong in not choosing him. Tbh I saw very similar monolgues from a documentary about a serial killer before. What finally made me lose interest was the first lemon scene...I won't go into it.

    TLDR: MC is a typical psychopath who believes he's owed the world, treats women as trophies he can buy or manipulate and somehow believes it's for everyone's own good that he does.

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    lybdis
    Status: chapter 3: world has rules and...

    I personally think I have low standards when it comes to reading webnovels and fanfics, that the content is readable and comprehensible even with bad grammar (because I myself dont know if my grammar is correct or good), but this one is hard to read and comprehend (to me).

    I haven't read very far, obviously, but from what I read so far the premise seems to have potential to be good, I would've personally continued to read but won't as I stated, hard to read and understand for me.

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    ZeleniyKrokodil
    Status: notice

    310 chapters. The end. 3/5 rating.

    The author/protagonist perceives the world and plot of Harry Potter as a farce. He treats it with more or less caution, but still perceives it as a farce. As a result, the work is mostly just a farce.

    The author also writes rather blandly. As if he has a budget limit and he is trying to fit into it. As a result, everything in this novel is not good enough.

    The protagonist - looks like a relationship between comedy and tragedy. Up close and in person disgusting, from afar pleasant. Honestly, the concept of such a character is the best part of this work, everything else is not something outstanding or even interesting.

    Other characters in this world are basically nothing more than NPCs.

    The whole work can be divided into 3 main directions and into 2 parts.

    Part before chapter 150 and part after.

    The plot of Harry Potter.

    The plot of the origin of magic. Plot of hentai manga with tags NTR, cheating, etc.

    The parts differ in the quality of writing, plot holes, etc. If the first part is poorly written and closer to 2/5, then the second part is better written and closer to 4/5. In the first part, there are many different problems mainly with the lore, the system, and the carelessness of the protagonist; but there are also many other small problems. In the second part, the lore, the system, and the carelessness of the protagonist are mostly covered. Although he never began to doubt the system (yes, it reincarnated him, but still). The budget for graphics in the second part became a little bigger.

    The plot of Harry Potter follows the canon, except for all the romance and other small details... Well, the canon is known to many.

    1The fact that all the people in the canon are ordinary people; just ordinary people with magical powers. And basically, the canon is close to the trend of the dying world of magic. That is, there is nothing too outstanding in it.

    2The fact that much of the canon is forcibly adjusted to fit the plot, which is why there are inconsistencies, violations of logic and plot holes here and there.

    3The fact that the plot is mostly limited to England. Which makes this story either small-scale or requires a significant change to the canon and the influence of Voldemort, Dumbledore, England and other characters on the rest of the world of wizards and muggles.

    4The fact that the whole story has so many blank spots that everyone can color them in their own way.

    In short, you should not write fanfic directly for the canon and especially make the canon inviolable.

    In this regard, the author added inviolability to the canon in the form of the will of the world... Also, all known and unknown characters were processed: their intelligence was artificially reduced, their vices were grotesquely increased / or the author additionally drew attention to the vices, and not the virtues of the characters; their ability to act was forcibly driven into the framework of their characters in the canon. If ordinary people are reduced to the level of NPCs, the result will be quite obvious.

    The plot of the origin of magic... Well... There is nothing special about it. At least the author could not write it in such a way that it was something outstanding.

    Romance and eroticism. Well... It is easiest to compare this work with hentai manga in this regard. The protagonist has 3 properties of classic NTR characters: the appearance of a handsome scoundrel; the wealth and power of a dandy; the methods of an old and nasty bastard. And to these qualities of a villain is added the attitude to the life of the victim of NTR who has gone to the dark side. That is, the protagonist uses any methods to achieve any goals that interest him, is very petty and spiteful, and also likes to minimize any negative opportunities for himself. As a result, the protagonist has a passion for depriving men of their male dignity in the literal and figurative sense. He also prefers to slowly seduce women using only the necessary minimum of rudeness and cruelty. All this is not so difficult to do, because the characters in this novel are nothing more than NPCs.

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    Faiz
    Status: c75

    quite promising but a bit boring because of the slow plot and the MC who is still underage. I really hope netori in this story

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