Bro I saw wanna see this to the end. So I really hope you don't drop this. 

This is my favourite webnovel from the 150+ I have in library. But I hope you can upload more even if it means decreasing chapter length. After all I read the first 33 chapters in one day anyways.

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You should also upload this on Webnovel as Scribblehub is not that popular.

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Bro, I want to say is that the first part of the novel was great but why on earth did you think it was a good idea to start exaggerating everything while writing as if another xuanhuan novel.

The reasons xuanhuan novels are like that is because when chinese is translated into English one sentence takes a paragraph. 

So unless you are doing it to increase word count please stop. Because in xuanhuan novels they have like 7 paragraphs to just say ones hair, eye and skin colour.

Now I don't even now when you are describing something as big as a mountain. You mean it litterly or it is just the size of the hulk but just exaggerating because of xuanhuan writing.

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This story is definately worth the read, especially if you were a fan of Versatile Mage.  I myself only read about half of the released chapters in the original series, but so far I believe I like this version of the story better.

Mo Fan seems a bit more likeable and relatable as a character than he was in the early story of the original. Likely as even though he can be fairly shameless and arrogant at times, it is now tempered with experience and some thought behind his actions.  While in the original he was an amazing mage, but seemed to be very slow to develop as an actual person. I think I have seen more character development in these first 90 or so chapters as the first few thousand in the original.

I definately recommend reading if you were a fan of the original, or even if you just want to pick up a new story to entertain yourself.  While knowledge if the original definately makes you feel less lost, it isn't an absolute requirement to read.

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As someone who could not get past the second arc in the original due to inconsistesies, I can safely say this is much more readable. Also, the characters act more how I would expect them to act. They convey their feelings better, and you can feel the author's care for preserving them. This is not generic power fantasy slop.

Only cons are the various misspellings and slight grammatical errors. 

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As much as I like this story it a bit unrealistic and one of the reviews is wild saying Mo fan is so more mature and likeable in this story compared to the original yeah no duh he is a full grown man in this story within the body of his previous self he is obviously more mature and ofc he is leveling up faster and quicker he has thousands/millions of resources and knowledge of where to get money not to mention he stole all the mu clan money they had in the safe bank. You can't compare a child at 14/15 to Mo fan at the end of the original story to have unlocked 4 elements at the beginning stage and then 7 more at the intermediate level and then unlock all other 8 elements while still being intermediate I don't understand this Mo fan seems so op in some chapters and so weak chapters. I don't dislike this story but this story has a few plots hole already but the part I'm upset is what happened to mu NingXue like what was she supposed to do like she is a slightly more powerful intermediate mage but not by much he should be helping her not qin yue'r yes she nice to NingXue in the original but still.

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Honestly one of the best fanfic and definitely the best versatile mage fan fic I read so far. I like the new twists the author brought to the original story and it definitely is a page turner. Characters are also true with slight deviation from their original, which is also welcome. The only reason I am not giving it a 5 star is because of slow updates and some chapters contain unnecessary info. Author has to keep in mind that most of the readers of fanfics usually read the original story so too much detail can feel unnecessary as they already know it from the original story. Though some information is nice and adds to the story but too much of it makes it cumbersome. I would definitely follow along the journey to see where the author takes us. Author please continue your story and lets us know if you need any support to pump out more chapters of this story.

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I Enjoy Reading it a lot, and I hope to see this history completed.

I think the same as the other reviewer: ''But I hope you can upload more even if it means decreasing chapter length''. That one month between chapter 59 and the 60 is a long time.

Loving the history so far either way. Thanks

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