SO... Let's start by saying that ACFoster is Interesting in nature. That could be good at times, or bad. Now what I mean by that: is the way they create dungeons and the type of world they create in this story. 

Going from the dungeons, without any spoilers, do NOT expect your everyday RPG-style dungeon. While they could be considered as such, there is hardly any resemblance of those things in this story making them pretty unique. Maybe not fresh, but very unique. 

Moving on, while the story is still in its early stages, the world is slowly built as Ikarus learns these things so you learn with the protag. It can be nice like it has so far, but it can always leave you wanting to know just a bit more about things like races and other political crap that could be interesting but has no major effect on our flaming chicken. 

Now, here is the best part. THERE IS character growth. Over the course of the story so far, our protag is childish, and without spoiling anything here either, through events and other characters, she begins to correct some of her behaviors or outright realize she may have been wrong about what she initially thought of herself. THIS IS EXCELLENT USE of supporting characters and events because it's actually enhancing the story rather than hurting it as some other novels do. 

That will be all for me, also heh, bet you weren't expecting this @ACFoster99

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One of the best novel I've ever read, the main character is very fun, the novel has lots of interesting characters, the chapters are released very quickly, I'm really enjoying it.

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Author is a very natural storyteller with a good sense of humor-- however, I wish they would pay more attention to the fundamentals (spelling, grammar, run-on sentences). My rating is high despite that because I think the characters and their relationships are well-rendered (and, simply, I wanted to keep reading the whole way through), but it may be a turn-off for others.

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