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Total Views (Chapters): | 8,233 |
Average Views: | 484 |
Word Count: | 18,431 |
Average Words: | 1,084 |
Pages: | 68 |
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16 / 17 | Feb 20, 2022 |
First of all, I want to say that it is difficult to decide how good this story is or will be with only up to chapter 16 published. However, I can personally assure you that these 16 chapter are going to be the loveliest and most heartbreaking lines you have ever read in your lifetime.
The beginning is but a bit weird to be honest. It is the only part where I would say that the male protagonist is acting strange. For example, how could you not notice that your wife is getting bullied by your own Mother or take a woman for around 10 years for granted?! In my opinion, that doesn't make any sense. On the other side, I so much enjoyed the suffering of the male Protagonist in the following chapters in particular for he made such stupid mistakes. Especially how he got to rethink his own actions and to the point whom he himself noticed his mistakes. This whole process makes the time regression so relieving and emotional (I didn't cry at all) , as though you could feel the protagonists emotions for yourself.
I really enjoyed to read the first part of the story and even though I don't comment on any chapters that I appreciate them I hope that there will be a continuation.
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