As a standard villainess in an amateur romantic fantasy novel, one must have prestigious background to grind people underfoot, a stunning appearance yet no one admires, a proverbial horrid personality only a mother would love and of course, a head filled with water.
The end of the novel also signals the end of the villainess. Stripped of her title and judged for her crime losing everything. But does she have to lose her beautiful face as well?
She just came out from a two-year long relationship then one day she was told she is to become this kind of villainess.
Ayan was in a dilemma.
Ayan can perfectly feel the world's malice.
Crossing to an alternate world is okay. But going to the ancient times to bear hardships? No,no,no!
The pearl of the Rose family vehemently refuses the 'privilege'.
Unfortunately, heaven was determined to make her follow the path of her abused transmigrated predecessors.
No way!
What? She only has two days to live!?
Ayan gritted her teeth and demanded compensation.
(ʘ言ʘ╬)... Since you want me to cross, then cross it is but I dare not follow your broken script!
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Cover art above is not mine. Talent and handwork belongs solely to its amazing creator.
The plot and characters make this fun to read. So before you read my list of criticism. This was enjoy to read.
It is was good in the beginning. Even though I had to read twice some chapter since the grammer didn't make sense. My complaint is the grammer took a nose dive in later chapter to the point I couldn't understand what was going on and decided to stop reading. It wasn't just grammer mistakes the author didn't add enough words to make character line make sense, it was choppy sentenses and lines
Insert Meme: GODZILLA HAD A STROKE READING THIS STORY.
Another major issue is we don't know which character prospective we reading from. We go from the main character, husband, back to main character, to side character. It jumps around.
All in all
The plot I will give it 3 out 5 stars
Grammer is 1 out 5 stars, later chapters are google translate bad.
Characters are 4 out 5, honestly their fun to read.
I'm mad because this could have been a fun story if the grammer was better and the author added seperator between prospective changes.
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