The plot and characters make this fun to read. So before you read my list of criticism. This was enjoy to read.
It is was good in the beginning. Even though I had to read twice some chapter since the grammer didn't make sense. My complaint is the grammer took a nose dive in later chapter to the point I couldn't understand what was going on and decided to stop reading. It wasn't just grammer mistakes the author didn't add enough words to make character line make sense, it was choppy sentenses and lines
Insert Meme: GODZILLA HAD A STROKE READING THIS STORY.
Another major issue is we don't know which character prospective we reading from. We go from the main character, husband, back to main character, to side character. It jumps around.
All in all
The plot I will give it 3 out 5 stars
Grammer is 1 out 5 stars, later chapters are google translate bad.
Characters are 4 out 5, honestly their fun to read.
I'm mad because this could have been a fun story if the grammer was better and the author added seperator between prospective changes.
Hana was the perfect high school girl. Always kind to her classmates and family. That is until she became addicted to MMORPGs and her life did a total 180. Due to a string of unfortunate events, she finds herself knocking on death’s door. O
Aperio had been a slave for as long as she could remember. She toiled away in the palace of her masters, her body forced to obey, her mind no longer caring that she did. Her only joy was the small inconveniences an error in her work could bring, t
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.
I didn’t die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn’t get hit b
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Keith, a
The plot and characters make this fun to read. So before you read my list of criticism. This was enjoy to read.
It is was good in the beginning. Even though I had to read twice some chapter since the grammer didn't make sense. My complaint is the grammer took a nose dive in later chapter to the point I couldn't understand what was going on and decided to stop reading. It wasn't just grammer mistakes the author didn't add enough words to make character line make sense, it was choppy sentenses and lines
Insert Meme: GODZILLA HAD A STROKE READING THIS STORY.
Another major issue is we don't know which character prospective we reading from. We go from the main character, husband, back to main character, to side character. It jumps around.
All in all
The plot I will give it 3 out 5 stars
Grammer is 1 out 5 stars, later chapters are google translate bad.
Characters are 4 out 5, honestly their fun to read.
I'm mad because this could have been a fun story if the grammer was better and the author added seperator between prospective changes.
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