In 2030, two planets collided; Earth and a planet filled with magic called Lumina. Since then, billions died due to a surge in monsters, refugees were scattered around the world and new countries were formed. Lumina's magic met Earth's technology and soon cities began to form adventurers and armies to combat the ever-growing presence of monsters. However, this leaves thousands displaced, millions of people live in poverty, the poor only get poorer and the rich get richer.
This story takes place 30 years after this event which would come to be known as the Great Merge. It follows a group who work as elite mercenaries for an organistion called Unwanted. The Unwanted take in those thrown out from society, young or old, it didn't matter. Those that were chosen were selected for their special skills, many of them orpahns, discarded nobles, slaves- they were deemed disposbale from the various cities they lived in. However, the Unwanted operate solely as a tool for the elite and the cities they operated in, they fight wars, clear dungeons, kill mad kings/monsters, etc.
The main charcater who you will come to know his name is one of these Unwanted, and within his team are other people like him. They are all strong and went through the gruelling training process and now they operate as field agents. Follow them as they under go missions and experience life.
Warning: Extreme Gore, Sexual Content, Only for Mature Audiences.
Note: This is a light LitRPG story with a main focus on the story but some aspects on the system.
Takes a few chapters to get started but once it does, you will be hooked. Great story, good but of comedy and a hood plot so far. MC is not an idiot so that is a huge bonus
Update- author is an ass, not once has he mass released. The every day release is great and all but when you write a damn good story you need to do mass releases. If you read it, you will be hooked
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The plot and the character are well put together the worldbuilding is probably the best part I honestly really like it BUT there are many small grammar errors that build up to be quite annoying even though its easy to fix those in your head as you read them. So why only three stars? Well on many occasions characters names will accidentally get used in place of someone else in the same scene which completely messes with the flow of any kind of scene. Also several mistakes of he or she being used for characters that they do not apply to, this particular problem seemed to be most common in the the explicit chapters so if you dont read those you probably wouldnt even notice them. However the biggest issue is a lack of consistancy throughout mostly small things but it just give it a rough and unpolished feeling as though even the auther himself doesnt remember what he wrote. This review probably comes off as harsh but if the grammar and inconsistancies were edited and cleaned up I would probably give this story a 5 star.
That being said it was a little hard to get past the early chapters because the afore mentioned issues but once I did I grew to really like this one and do recommend it.
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Very well written!
Story and characters are captivating. Promising novel.
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Probably the most realist litrpg i've read in months
Fantastic characters with an expanding world. Good smut and a strong plot element.
Recommended
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A very refreshing story, even though the MC is kinda OP I focus more on the whole world-setting. It's very broadly described and leaves a lot to interpretion, but I love it. Of course some clichés are met but, instead of a lot of other stories posted here, it has another "feel" to it.
Additional props to the Author because I read it on RR where it stopped at Chapter 20 and after a heartattack and some sobbing later I am very glad I found this story here.
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