By Master4thWall
[R-18, Mature Element Warning!] [Multiverse!]
A young man with a questionable job dies, eaten by a shark. To his surprise, afterlife was a spinning roulette that decided his next world and powers, with an annoyed Goddess supervising the pro
Takes a few chapters to get started but once it does, you will be hooked. Great story, good but of comedy and a hood plot so far. MC is not an idiot so that is a huge bonus
Update- author is an ass, not once has he mass released. The every day release is great and all but when you write a damn good story you need to do mass releases. If you read it, you will be hooked
Read More
Very well written!
Story and characters are captivating. Promising novel.
Read More
Probably the most realist litrpg i've read in months
Fantastic characters with an expanding world. Good smut and a strong plot element.
Recommended
Read More
A very refreshing story, even though the MC is kinda OP I focus more on the whole world-setting. It's very broadly described and leaves a lot to interpretion, but I love it. Of course some clichés are met but, instead of a lot of other stories posted here, it has another "feel" to it.
Additional props to the Author because I read it on RR where it stopped at Chapter 20 and after a heartattack and some sobbing later I am very glad I found this story here.
Read More
The plot and the character are well put together the worldbuilding is probably the best part I honestly really like it BUT there are many small grammar errors that build up to be quite annoying even though its easy to fix those in your head as you read them. So why only three stars? Well on many occasions characters names will accidentally get used in place of someone else in the same scene which completely messes with the flow of any kind of scene. Also several mistakes of he or she being used for characters that they do not apply to, this particular problem seemed to be most common in the the explicit chapters so if you dont read those you probably wouldnt even notice them. However the biggest issue is a lack of consistancy throughout mostly small things but it just give it a rough and unpolished feeling as though even the auther himself doesnt remember what he wrote. This review probably comes off as harsh but if the grammar and inconsistancies were edited and cleaned up I would probably give this story a 5 star.
That being said it was a little hard to get past the early chapters because the afore mentioned issues but once I did I grew to really like this one and do recommend it.
Read More