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Really intriguing story that gets more interesting as it goes on. The world building and character development are amazing and the writing is also one of the best I've read so far. Plot has a lot of potential and am looking forward to where the story is heading. Highly recommended and definitely worth a read so far
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Style:The style is a nice one. The way the author made the first few chapters just a massive info dump makes it a bit boring in my opinion. Info dumps are cool when done in a way that still makes it exciting, info dumping while two characters are conversing or when one character is personally putting their input and opinions on said info dump, makes it a nicer info dump that also lets the characters shine a bit. That aside, I like how it's written and I like the premise of the story and the world. 4 stars!
Grammar:Grammar is nice and good, there aren't any mistakes that I could notice. 5/5 stars!
Characters:
The Goddess is definitely my type of character, a goofy and lazy person that's in a position of power always leads to fun outcomes. From the chapters that I've read, she's pretty cool, though I think that her personally going down to earth to meet someone she'll be reincarnating doesn't really fit her whole character and personality, but it was a fun sequence and I appreciate it. Shun's pretty vanilla though, not that that's wrong, but a little spice never hurt anyone, still a nice character though, I love his reactions. 5/5 stars!
There's nothing more to say really, the characters are written nicely, the style is cool, and the story itself has good grammar so we can read it nicely and without any hitches. 4.5 stars cause the style, but yeah it's a nice story with a good plot!
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