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Average Words: | 1,792 |
Pages: | 150 |
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The idea was interesting. I haven't read a story about a female pro gamer yet, but the focus seems to be a bit much on the childhood and rng happenings right now.
There are quite a few issues with the story. The author doesn't have much planned out and quite a few characters always act the same/stereotypical and don't really react to the MC doing stuff. Also the flow of the story and sentence structure is weird. Furthermore there is quite a lot of instances of incorrect tenses and multiples.
If the author improves his grammar or proofreads more/uses grammarly it would already improve the story. After that we just need more character interactions, longer chapters and an actual plotline instead of rng events. The prelude is already interesting enough.
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Love the story but I have stopped reading. All though none of it seems too incorrect the structure and phrasing of sentences is odd enough regularly enough to rip me from the story. The author will become a force to be reckoned with once his/her grammer improves.
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