Supptisingly I enjoyed the story a lot.

We get a lot of show, don't tell content build. With a lot of character development. 

Just take the MC, were not told she is trans, we are shown her struggle and selfdiscovery. Only after that we discover her true nature.

For a lot of people it's hard to imagine what it's like not feeling at home in your own body or flat out hating it. Therefore it was great we learned what the MC was like originally, a depressed buffguy, who supressed most of his emotions to the outside world. A character a lot of people can easily relate to. It allows the character to develop and gives depth.

A lot of the time I wonder: why does the author add the gender bender tag, because the MC is male for all but 1 or 2 chapters, then becomes female, is like oh, ok, cool. And it's almost never adresses again. (Just why???) This story actually embraces it. 

If your hesitant to read this thanks to the Hollywood stigma of poorly written LGBT+ movies, then give this a try. Here most of the characters are properly developt.

The only reason I give the story 4 stars is because it feels vastly unfinnished.

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This story is good, my only gripe is the lack of engaging fights that the MC experiences. I took some inspiration from this story in writing my own novel so it only does justice that I rate it.

So I'll rate it 5 stars.

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Has potential but falls into several cliches and hazards stories like this often fall into. I honestly believe this could be great and maybe further along it does get better, but from what I've read it hasn't gotten that far. The character could be interesting, but they aren't, the main problem is the author seems to try and shove the s*xuality and beliefs of each and every character to the forefront of their personality traits even when it doesn't make narrative sense or is jarring for the reader. Introduced to a new character? The first thing that comes from them is them questioning the main character's preferences or them making some commentary on it. I understand the story's focus is on the s*xuality and the restraints the main characters feel with it, but again the way the character interact and bring it up is like trying to use a jackhammer to drive in  a nail. I believe introductions like this can be done well and flow with the story but from what I've read so far the author hasn't gotten to that point yet.

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Ah what can be said about the marvelous misadventures of Tami? 

That she is one of my favorite characters from an amazing lineup of main characters written by Vale? That the world feels so fleshed out and interesting, much larger than one thinks on first glance? That the fight scenes feel visceral and raw, but in a way that just pumps you the f**k up? That the s*xy bits are... Well fantastic. 

Vale's done it again folx. Get ready to get horn... Horny? No... Horned? Sure. Horned. 

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I think this story marks a real development of Valerie's writing style. We have a well crafted world pottering along in the background with greater meaning teased throughout the story while the heavy character focus drives each chapter. Each chapter is long, well written, and covers a great deal of events. Characters are well realised, believable, and really engaging.

This is the dream for transgender fiction. While the story is still in early stages it's so promising and I can't wait for each chapter release, as soon as I'm done reading I'm back to wishing there was another.

Well done on this story Vale!

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this story hit me like a truck. It stripped me of my ace identity, and I woke up in a new, beautiful, demi world

(read this story you'll like it I promise)

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The Trans Lesbian story you need to read!

QuietValerie is back with yet another amazing story! With "Trouble with Horns" Valerie once again skillfully weaves together multiple genres, themes and tropes to create an engaging story that grabs you and holds on.

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Thank you for the nice egg in this trying time.

Each chapter leaves me looking forward to where the story will head next.

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So goooooood! I can't wait to see how things turn out for Tami.

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Y'all ever get that awkward question, "Hey, how come you always play as a girl in videogames?" and struggle to answer it without delving deep into your painful genderfeels? Well, that's the central premise of this story, and it's brilliantly done.

If you could live your true gender in a total-immersion VR simulator for a week, what would it make you feel? F**k around and find out, friends. This story's a winner.

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