I really like the story (especially with the mention of Yu Yu Hakusho). I give it 4 stars, but it could have been 5 stars. It's just that sometimes, it's difficult to follow who is speaking.

The change of point of view can be confusing because there's no indication that it's a different POV.

Furthermore, in certain chapters, the continuity with the previous chapter is missing, which gave me the impression of having skipped a chapter.

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Titivillus

Status: 130. great television series.

Jun 19, 2024

I'm abandoning this series, billy personal life is not interesting, and the fun in most these histories is the reaction of people to the tech, films, comics, etc that the character introduce at the time. Since the history is just company building basically (with the MC comiting basic mistakes a lot of times about investiments, avoiding taxes, bad negotiations, etc) he only has sucess because of future knowlege about companies that will 100% work and beting. So not much of a fun story, dunno how I got so far... Also, a lot of mistakes in sentences and grammar.

Also, sometimes when the autor changes the name of a program like yu yu hakusho he can't decide what name will stick in the story... And the system points are rarelly show and explained, so we don't really have a good idea about how impactiful each work is, etc.

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pintoyac

Status: c26

Jul 28, 2024

2 stars, The story is extremely annoying to read, it's a disjointed mess and the MC is completely unlikeable. I'm not sure, but most of the time it feels as if I'm reading the diary of someone who has an ASD (and I should know, since my son also has it). If it's like that, then you should write the general outlines, and request from someone else to go over the story to see if it makes any sense at all.

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