By BrokenDoll
Laurus is a centuries old angel, that becomes wrapped up in the machinations of hell and changed utterly. Transformed into a woman she is forced not just to deal with the depravity of hell but with the schemes of a demon lord while she struggles f
The introduction to the story is simple, but it sets the tone and expectations for the reader. It should be quickly apparent for a reader whether the story is for them or not.
Despite the simple start, there is a lot of potential going forward. Furthermore, the quality of the writing is quite good. For instance, a lot of the world building is done through character dialogue that for the most part feels natural.
There are few noticeable grammatical errors, and the ones that I came across were simple typos that didn't disturb the story significantly.
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