By ItsQuarters
When a woman (Full service Futa) gets washed up on the shore of a strange island, she finds herself fighting for survival against the strange endemic life of this island. Reptiles the size of dogs, Iguana’s the size of elephants, and…A
The story is rather silly besides the whammy it gut-punches you with when you learn of Harriet's past. MC is rather carefree and acts on a whim for the most part, fitting the overall vibe of the story. Character interactions and dialogue are fine, but the plot seems to be lacking a bit, not having found its direction with everyone meandering about, not quite accomplishing anything.
Like Harriet was in a time dilation field, where 30 years passed within, and only 1 year in reality, yet she still decides to go to Hogwarts? Might as well add a 'Slice of Life' tag with how things are going.
Like when they go to speak/confront Dumbledore about why he dropped the ball with Harriet, and to let him know whats up. Yet Author just skipped past it and only revisited later when it could've just been addressed then, only thing it did was disrupt the flow of the story. Which happens frequently with the back and forth jumps
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