The chapters will now be uploaded on every Thursday.
Disclaimer*
Dear Reader,
The upcoming novel follows the story of a yandere woman who, despite her menacing persona as a gangster, has a strong and passionate love for her husband. These chapters feature dominant themes, sensitive subjects, and explicit content. If the dominant nature of the woman makes you uncomfortable, I kindly advise to refrain from continuing with the novel.
Thank you.
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"Who are you?" I asked the woman who sat a few meters away from me.
"Your wife," she shot back at me.
Stunned, I asked further, "My wife?" I mean, what the hell?
"Cut the crap, I listed some points in this document. You better abide by them." She threw a document filled with clauses.
"What the fuck, at least tell me your name?" I asked, with fear floating before my eyes.
"Shanaya Jonas," she asserted.
"Shanaya, the devil woman of the underworld of Nivea?!" I plopped down with utter fear and disbelief.
No one knew the devil woman who ruled over the entire Nivea with a sword in her right hand and decapitated her opponents.
Everyone feared her dominant nature because she never tolerated nonsense within her domain. Even the highest government officials posed no threat to her, as she never crossed the government's boundaries. The women in Nivea were bold and straightforward towards men, as they received support from this deadly woman whom every man assumed to be innocent, but was really a she-devil in disguise.
"Please don't kill me, I haven't committed any sin," I pleaded, bowing before her.
"No, you haven't, but you've captured my heart, honey. So now I own you, and if you ever try to escape from me, pray that the consequences won't befall you too soon." She gently bit my neck, sending shivers down my spine.
Will Ryan continue his journey of love or will he escape from her? This journey contains love, hatred, pain, and pleasure.
I enjoy these types of stories when done well. This isn't done poorly, but it's not done well either. It's just alright. The characters (especially the wife) are just so all over the place. You could argue the husband is acting complacent out of fear of his "wifes" actions. He straight up at one point says "I want a divorce" then gives multiple fair reasons on why. How does the wife respond to this? She drugs him, beats him up with a whip to the point of hospitalization. He was already in a relationship before this. So being forced to marry her, then getting punished for going back to his girlfriend who he was already with, only to be punished is frustrating. The wife acts bipolar, caring one second, and twisted the next. While the husband is too scared/meager to actually stand up for wha he wants. The one time he's tried, he gets beat up and drugged. All in all if yhe wife wasn't as floppy, and the husband more mad at being forced to marry what was basically a stranger. I would have enjoyed this story more
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The plot is expertly crafted, offering a perfect balance of romance, suspense, and unexpected twists. The author's vivid descriptions immerse the reader in a world filled with danger, passion, and undeniable chemistry. The pacing is well-executed, ensuring that the story maintains its momentum, making it difficult to put down.
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Extremely amazing, was looking for a novel like this for quite some time but didn't find much
Love it
Although one humble suggestion, the author might want to showcase the strength of the female characters more
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