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I enjoy these types of stories when done well. This isn't done poorly, but it's not done well either. It's just alright. The characters (especially the wife) are just so all over the place. You could argue the husband is acting complacent out of fear of his "wifes" actions. He straight up at one point says "I want a divorce" then gives multiple fair reasons on why. How does the wife respond to this? She drugs him, beats him up with a whip to the point of hospitalization. He was already in a relationship before this. So being forced to marry her, then getting punished for going back to his girlfriend who he was already with, only to be punished is frustrating. The wife acts bipolar, caring one second, and twisted the next. While the husband is too scared/meager to actually stand up for wha he wants. The one time he's tried, he gets beat up and drugged. All in all if yhe wife wasn't as floppy, and the husband more mad at being forced to marry what was basically a stranger. I would have enjoyed this story more
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The plot is expertly crafted, offering a perfect balance of romance, suspense, and unexpected twists. The author's vivid descriptions immerse the reader in a world filled with danger, passion, and undeniable chemistry. The pacing is well-executed, ensuring that the story maintains its momentum, making it difficult to put down.
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