Good story so far but seriously you must really fix your grammar like male student being call she you make it very confuse wither this guy is male or female
And sometimes it get confused are when they talking or not talking
So it's a shame at how poorly translated this novel is. From a smut standpoint the story itself is entertaining.
However whole chapters are practically unreadable because the grammar is so atrocious. As far as I can tell pronouns are randomly decided. Sister/brother can not be trusted. Hell I'm still not 100% sure the main character's rival is male, female or a futa since it changes every other chapter. Also there are too many times where you can't tell who is speaking since incorrect pronouns are used and context can't be trusted.
Warning: This is a rewrite of my previous fanfic— Every Hole is a Goal.
Current World: Avatar: The Last Airbender
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Executed for escaping his owners, Nik met a relieving fate of beheading with the circumstances of his corpse
Good story so far but seriously you must really fix your grammar like male student being call she you make it very confuse wither this guy is male or female
And sometimes it get confused are when they talking or not talking
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So it's a shame at how poorly translated this novel is. From a smut standpoint the story itself is entertaining.
However whole chapters are practically unreadable because the grammar is so atrocious. As far as I can tell pronouns are randomly decided. Sister/brother can not be trusted. Hell I'm still not 100% sure the main character's rival is male, female or a futa since it changes every other chapter. Also there are too many times where you can't tell who is speaking since incorrect pronouns are used and context can't be trusted.
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Pretty good material to make a mess on your walls imo plot is just bro giving endless cream pies to women and girls without ever getting tired
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