By akikan40
Hello, this is Akikan40.
You might have read my work on another different site, and it might be my first time uploading my story on a different site, but everything has to be started with a first step, so I decided to update my story here
Good story so far but seriously you must really fix your grammar like male student being call she you make it very confuse wither this guy is male or female
And sometimes it get confused are when they talking or not talking
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So it's a shame at how poorly translated this novel is. From a smut standpoint the story itself is entertaining.
However whole chapters are practically unreadable because the grammar is so atrocious. As far as I can tell pronouns are randomly decided. Sister/brother can not be trusted. Hell I'm still not 100% sure the main character's rival is male, female or a futa since it changes every other chapter. Also there are too many times where you can't tell who is speaking since incorrect pronouns are used and context can't be trusted.
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Pretty good material to make a mess on your walls imo plot is just bro giving endless cream pies to women and girls without ever getting tired
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