if only they hadn't let down their guard in front of the demon lord, they would have been given the chance to go home. The demon queen had something else planned though for the heroes.
all of the above descriptions were me writing, an Idea, then I started writing, so she didn't suffer any wounds during the fight.
The prologue chapters are not the actual demon queen, but the goddess creating the plot.
I do not have much experience writing stories, but I try to put as much effort into my story as I can. I do try to keep my chapters released in a schedule, although it never exactly goes as planned when I write, so expect varying lengths to chapters that I write, and try to point out a plot hole, as I do leave those in sometimes.
This is a WN with good potential. Its a light-hearted WN with a comedic undertone. However, the events make no sense sometimes. I hope that this budding series can grow into a splendid WN!
Edit: there's a bit too much different POVs. Too much POV makes a story lose focus and its detrimental to a serious WN. I would recommend increasing MC (kora) screentime and reducing the amount of other POVs
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