I honestly don't know how to feel about this. The plot is quite generic. ~~The MC's personality is... something I'm not quite fond of tbh~~. I am willing to see how this turns out, but I don't think that I will enjoy it that much. I would recommend giving this a try to see if you like it.

Update: I was wrong, I like this very much. The protagonist's personality changed in a satisfactory direction and there's a solid reason for it too. The motive for his actions have been made relatively clear.

Worldbuilding is good, characters have depth to them and aren't cookie cutter copies. The FMC is cute as hell.

Some interactions could've been better and fail to make complete sense (specifically side characters) and there are some things that could be done better.

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Also, it has been hinted that our MC has multiple personalities, hence my initial aversion to his behaviour, however it did get sorted out. There has also been some foreshadowing of him being the 'balance' between light and dark so our MC may just be something more than just a Curse User.

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synmahin

Status: chapter 37

Jun 28, 2024

First of all, luv Author Svneighter. Got respect for him for this dedication. Just like his other series, this another exceptional one too.

Let me get this clear, this series isn't perfect tbh. There are multiple plot holes and sometimes going from one chapter to another feels kinda unnatural. The character traits are somewhat weird, sometimes has off-putting personalities.

Now comes the sweet part. First of all, no harem (I think?), MC seems dedicated yet confused. He has two personalities mixed in, so this weird ass behaviour is understandable. The other side characters (basically 2 losing heroines he save), interaction seems unrealistic. Like how do they even trust each other from the first time they met. Basically it's strange, give it a read you'll understand. The FL is cute and sometimes aloof. Her character change doesn't make sense. But still it's fkn cute, wut can I say.

Reading this Novel, I realised just how many degenerated readers there are out there. Some literally harassing our boi svneighter (don't u worry I support u). These readers don't seem to understand plot progression and just says random as stuff, that is infuriating to just read as an author. Just read the comments and dont be like them. Be supportive and show luv.

The only reason I'm giving it a 4* isn't bcz it didn't satisfy me, no it did. It's just there are lots of mistakes. If in the future he somehow fixes these, I'll give it a 5*.

Anyway, do give us fast and more updates regarding this and ur latest series :3

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Vermillion_Avex

Status: chapter 10- on his way~2

Aug 7, 2024

The grammar in this is... weird. Feels like a mix of someone using MTL and an ESL student trying to write a story in english.

The idea is quite nice, but the flow of the story is average at best. Things happen because they need to happen. Each chapter feels like it's own little bubble.

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