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YES THEY ARE BOTH YANDERE.
When a meteorite struck the earth's surface barely a million humans were left alive. All the laws became useless as people started doing whatever they wanted, and no one was there to stop them.
But soon a power started awakening in 10 years old called Ether.
Each person has a single power which can become very deadly depending on how they use it. After an orphan rose in power and created a Kingdom for the leftover humans, brutality died down but was not wiped instantly.
The King had two children from one of his wives.
' Keiran and Luna '
Born as royalties, they were provided with everything, everything but love. Love had no place where humans were trying to survive. when they turned 10 years old their lives turned from heaven to hell, they were declared to have an useless power.
Thrown into an arena of death, a nightmarish battleground where alliances were fleeting, and trust was a rarity, Keiran and Luna confronted harrowing challenges. Their father, consumed by lust for power, had cast them into this hellish arena, hoping they would emerge as formidable survivors. In this area there were no rules only winners and dead bodies.
Amidst the savagery of the arena, a guiding light emerged in the form of an enigmatic system. Whispers of guidance reached out to them, offering cues that led to survival opportunities, alliances, and ways to manipulate the arena's dynamics.
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"Disclaimer: I have no intentions of harming anyone's beliefs and their choices. This is purely fictional, so please take it as such. There will be mention of rape, brutality, and other crimes, but I won't be going into any details regarding them—no descriptions of the process."
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Romance | Revenge | Yandere | Kingdom | Royalty | R18 | Ether | Twisted Humans | Survival
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Minor spoilers (not important at all, honestly.)
Plot seems genuinely interesting and the main characters are decently well written.
The novel's world is dark but confusing, after over 100 chapters I'm still unsure if the meteor came very long ago or during the parent's generation. (It was hinted at both and that happens with different things, so expect some plot holes.) For example, one character talks about his ancestors and it looks like they've been in this post apocalypse for generations but in the protagonist's father's past it seemed as if it the powers were relatively new, specially with the waves of monster and all that. Problem is that the reason the kingdom and arena was created is; humanity fell to decadence and savagery, all manners of disgusting behavior were fine and the arena is the place where everyone can do whatever they wanted with the defeated people, killing, raping, enslaving, gender or age doesn't matter at all.
The system is seriously awful, at first it hides almost everything saying that he need to reach the requirements to unlock the full thing but when he does it still hides more and more with the usual excuses like "you'll find out later or you should do it on your own or you don't have the authority to know" but it doesn't feel natural, it's more like the author doesn't know either and keeps milking the 'mysteriousness' even though there really isn't any.
About the smut... there's a single
explicit and very detailed rape scene between random characters and also some very creepy scenes in the bath with the protagonist and his sister first as literal babies and then again as toddlers.
After some chapters, around 40 or 50, the author gets very increasingly sloppy with the editing in general; grammar, lack of commas and the most frequent and jarring would be the complete lack of space between paragraphs so most chapters end up a jumbled mess.
TLDR: sh*t grammar and writing, most everyone is rapey and creepy regardless if their target are literal toddlers, system is the worse i've ever seen and that is saying something. World seemed interesting at first but felt like things already said about the world kept getting rewritten but never corrected.
Can't really recommend this without some serious overhaul and editing by the author.
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