By Mortrexo
Yasenia is a child born different from the rest, her mother, Tatyana, used an ancient technique she found to absorb the world’s energy to get pregnant instead of having regular intercourse. Her objective was to create a lover for herself sin
Minor spoilers (not important at all, honestly.)
Plot seems genuinely interesting and the main characters are decently well written.
The novel's world is dark but confusing, after over 100 chapters I'm still unsure if the meteor came very long ago or during the parent's generation. (It was hinted at both and that happens with different things, so expect some plot holes.) For example, one character talks about his ancestors and it looks like they've been in this post apocalypse for generations but in the protagonist's father's past it seemed as if it the powers were relatively new, specially with the waves of monster and all that. Problem is that the reason the kingdom and arena was created is; humanity fell to decadence and savagery, all manners of disgusting behavior were fine and the arena is the place where everyone can do whatever they wanted with the defeated people, killing, raping, enslaving, gender or age doesn't matter at all.
The system is seriously awful, at first it hides almost everything saying that he need to reach the requirements to unlock the full thing but when he does it still hides more and more with the usual excuses like "you'll find out later or you should do it on your own or you don't have the authority to know" but it doesn't feel natural, it's more like the author doesn't know either and keeps milking the 'mysteriousness' even though there really isn't any.
About the smut... there's a single
explicit and very detailed rape scene between random characters and also some very creepy scenes in the bath with the protagonist and his sister first as literal babies and then again as toddlers.
After some chapters, around 40 or 50, the author gets very increasingly sloppy with the editing in general; grammar, lack of commas and the most frequent and jarring would be the complete lack of space between paragraphs so most chapters end up a jumbled mess.
TLDR: sh*t grammar and writing, most everyone is rapey and creepy regardless if their target are literal toddlers, system is the worse i've ever seen and that is saying something. World seemed interesting at first but felt like things already said about the world kept getting rewritten but never corrected.
Can't really recommend this without some serious overhaul and editing by the author.
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