While this story has the same premise as many other in the same genre, it does it with formidable execution. The words flow well, the grammar is good, and the style is top notch. The action scenes specifically are a pleasure to read.
One nitpick I have on the author is the reaction of the MC when he came back in time. He kinda knows immediately that it happened which is weird since you would expect him to be a bit more confused.
But other than that, it's really good! Read it if you enjoy LitRPG elements and world turned into a game kind of scenarios. It reminds me a bit of Reincarnator.
It is a fun story of a system operated world where the nd 7ses his knowledge from before being sent back in time to get a head start on claiming power. The grammar is well done and the world building is well thought out. The personality of the MC makes sense and their actions do not seem jarring, they are also still falable.
Give the story a shot. If you like kingdom building you will like this. Similar to slime and punishment without being so OP.
“Welcome Traveler.”
It was what Soren first heard when he met an impossibly strange man in a horrendously strange world, where fantasy became reality. Now, stranded in the unknown world, Soren must make use of the discovery that
Guilty Pleasure
While this story has the same premise as many other in the same genre, it does it with formidable execution. The words flow well, the grammar is good, and the style is top notch. The action scenes specifically are a pleasure to read.
One nitpick I have on the author is the reaction of the MC when he came back in time. He kinda knows immediately that it happened which is weird since you would expect him to be a bit more confused.
But other than that, it's really good! Read it if you enjoy LitRPG elements and world turned into a game kind of scenarios. It reminds me a bit of Reincarnator.
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It is a fun story of a system operated world where the nd 7ses his knowledge from before being sent back in time to get a head start on claiming power. The grammar is well done and the world building is well thought out. The personality of the MC makes sense and their actions do not seem jarring, they are also still falable.
Give the story a shot. If you like kingdom building you will like this. Similar to slime and punishment without being so OP.
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