As of right now I am really enjoying the story. The protagonist makes thought out and educated decisions and uses prior knowledge from the story that you would expect a casual Dragon Ball fan to know. The interactions between characters flows well and seem believable, and the fight scenes are well written. Overall, I'd say it's worth a read.

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This novels has very few flaws, even if I notice them they don’t detract from the story. I really like the premise, the MC is also making smart decisions with prior casual knowledge of the dragon ball series. I am so excited to see where this goes from here.

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I love this novel very creative and interesting and the characters personality is one of my favorites not kind not evil and not stupid also love how your taking the story keep up the good work.

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After the aweful prologue that adds nothing. The story focuses on training and minior characters of the original story.

Grammar is simply with a few typos. Character and scenes have little descriptions. As a result despise the short chapter length the story progresses quite rapidly.

Suggestion to the author trash the prologue and add one that gives the character a plausible motivation to train and add some early scenes with his family.

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A veeeery good story 

Just read it!

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