"I am god." everyone heard that from their TV, Phone, bus, Everyone in the world heard that and started panicking. "And the 10,000 of you with some sort of mark on your arm will be transported to another world with everyone else watching it via stream." I panicked my family and I are getting transported to another WORLD??!! Will we be able to get back and why were we picked? guess we have no choice but to go then. Hope it will be fun.
Note this is my first time writing and might have inconsistent uploads due to ADHD and school but I will try my best to upload and not wait months between uploads.
Originally reviewed at chapter 15
Pacing: 3 star the pacing is very bad at the earlier chapters especially Chapters 1-4 and 6-8 should have been grouped together instead of released separately. However, the pacing has improved significantly. The cliffhangers were especially bad early on abd while there are still cliffhangers they aren't nearly as bad as they used to be and don't feel like a partial chapter anymore. Glad that the author took my advice on that.
Characters: 3 stars
The characters are all likable so far albeit a bit 1 dimensional. If you don't like extreme sis cons I wouldn't recommend it however. Personally I'm fine with it as long as it's consensual and it is especially later on. The antagonists aren't very interesting but aren't horrible either. The author could do to flesh out the main cast a bit.
they were raised as siblings but aren't blood related so a need for an incest tag is debatable
Plot: 3 stars
I'm giving this a middling rating due to the fact that while the plot isn't a major focus so far it doesn't detract to much from the story. It's a causal fantasy romp don't expect deep plots and political intrigue or anything if the like.
Edit chapter 31:
Spelling and Grammer: 5 stars
While there are some issues with spelling and grammar they don't detract from the readability to much
World: 2 stars
The world isn't highly detailed basically generic fantasy with a mix of evil and good nobles so all you world building fans will be disappointed
Closing statement
A chill low stakes fantasy girls love novel that's not particularly deep. The author seems to want it to be character driven but fails to fully flesh out the characters. Not amazing but not bad either. I'll give it a good. 3 stars average +1 for my enjoyment.
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My only complaint is the protagonist being so weak willed honestly though it's a nice read just can't wrap my head around a succubus with no courage and cries at everything but the premise is interesting so all in all looking forward to more solid 4/5
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This is a romp; take it seriously at your own risk. The point, if there is one, seems to be to put the main character in positions were she can use her OP skills to solve problems in amusing ways. There are lots of faults (read another review) ; this has the feel of a learning experience for the author. But the point is, I'm still reading after 29 chapters and looking forward to more.
Some comments about the tags:
Transgender and GB: well, MC is indeed trans, but if you're looking for the drama and feels that go with an egg hatching, they're not here. By the time this story starts she's living as a girl and starting to transition medically, and her family supports her, so the drama is history. The transfer only makes things easier.
Weak to strong: while she is said to be the weakest of the 10, 000 transfers in the title that doesn't last long. With -- let's call it special training -- she and her sister quickly become the strongest. The mind control skills alone would make her OP.
Incest*: I don't think this is mentioned in the tags, and it actually has an asterisk because there are hints that the sisters in question are not biological sisters -- but they were raised as such, and that's enough to qualify as incest for some of us. It is all consensual, which helps.
Note that there is underage s*x happening as well. It's not the point of the story, but it frequently rears its head because....
Succubus: MC becomes a 14-year-old succubus. As expected, a succubus has needs, and who better than onee-chan to see that those needs are met? (To a large extent those needs can be met through skinship, and to a large extent they are, but not always.) I think the author has learned to wave at these incidents, but at least one was kind of in the reader's face. Your tolerance for this sort of thing may vary.
Being a succubus, the MC is also perverted (and likely bi or pan). And it shows some times when we hear about her inner thoughts. As expected of a succubus.
Okay, that takes care of things that may be squicky. If you can read past them, which I encourage, you'll find a story that's primarily a silly, lighthearted romp through another world.
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