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Chapter SeventeenNov 25, 2022
Chapter SixteenJul 26, 2022
Chapter FifteenJun 28, 2022
Chapter FourteenJun 14, 2022
Chapter ThirteenJun 7, 2022
Chapter TwelveMay 31, 2022
Chapter ElevenMay 23, 2022
Chapter TenMay 16, 2022
Chapter NineMay 9, 2022
Chapter EightMay 2, 2022
Chapter SevenApr 25, 2022
Chapter SixApr 18, 2022
Chapter FiveApr 11, 2022
Chapter FourApr 4, 2022
Chapter ThreeMar 28, 2022

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Charlie_Graves

Status: chapter 4

Apr 6, 2022

I went and took a read and I gotta say that this story is ok. It's got a good concept going but the immersion from reading is constantly broken with how it's been written, and I can't help but cringe at some of the word choices the author makes.

I suggest that the author read over their own drafts to see whether or not the writing flows. Otherwise, I can't say it's a good read.

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