good story with little to no flaw in story or other thing but:--
Harem is way too cringe.. MC is like flirting and catching women at every turn and his each and every non-married women that is introduced in story is becoming part of MC harem... This is absurd I am this is too absurd and cringe how tf someone could read or write so much cringe harem with pokemon catching girls... in a month after reincarnation he addes almost 4 girls in his harem and that's how many non-married girls we have in story as of yet except the camera-women who also in love with MC but MC ignores it..... This is the best example of desroying your work by forcefully ading cring harem....
This is more a plea for focusing less on world hopping stories if your MC is gonna reincarnate in another world let him stay there.
The very premise of this trope takes away all stakes why would we care about anyone in this world if the MC is just gonna bail on them and is looking forward to the next adventure. That truly turns a harem story into a pokemon story.
He collects all the pokemon and then leaves them all to do it all again just to really hammer in the fact that MC don´t give a fuk about them.
[Long Chapters] – 10k-15k (May exceed this with multiple parts)
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[Please note: This fan fiction follows the LIGHT NOVELS and NOT the ANIME.]
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[Author’s Note at the end]
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After one night of intense training, Kirishima wakes up with memories foreign to a world a life he barely remembers but the remains light a passion in his spirit like never before.
With a stronger will, he will rise to be number 1! His quir
(DB) A ‘normal’ teenager was watching Mumei, until an ad popped on his screen, now trying to get rid of the ad ask ”Want to have an adventure?”
(A/N: Doing for fun, And this one turned one of my favorites to work on,
I do not own anything from Marvel or Naruto. I just enjoy both universes.
So content warning first, this is a fanfic of hot steaming garbage. I hope you enjoy it. I will most likely put in bad words, fights, gore and maybe some smut. Or may
Alex Hunt was a smart man. By no means was he a genius, but he stood solidly in the above-average class of society. He thought that when he died, he would at least go with a bang.
Sadly for him though, his death was as generic as they came.
good story with little to no flaw in story or other thing but:--
Harem is way too cringe.. MC is like flirting and catching women at every turn and his each and every non-married women that is introduced in story is becoming part of MC harem... This is absurd I am this is too absurd and cringe how tf someone could read or write so much cringe harem with pokemon catching girls... in a month after reincarnation he addes almost 4 girls in his harem and that's how many non-married girls we have in story as of yet except the camera-women who also in love with MC but MC ignores it..... This is the best example of desroying your work by forcefully ading cring harem....
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This is more a plea for focusing less on world hopping stories if your MC is gonna reincarnate in another world let him stay there.
The very premise of this trope takes away all stakes why would we care about anyone in this world if the MC is just gonna bail on them and is looking forward to the next adventure. That truly turns a harem story into a pokemon story.
He collects all the pokemon and then leaves them all to do it all again just to really hammer in the fact that MC don´t give a fuk about them.
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