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Table of Contents 194

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Chapter 194: Days go On (END)May 30, 2023
Chapter 193: In MatrimonyMay 30, 2023
Chapter 192: Love in the Air (Spice/Smut at End of Chapter)May 30, 2023
Chapter 191: One for SharkieMay 30, 2023
Chapter 190: South Canal TroublesMay 30, 2023
Chapter 189: To Claim a DomainMay 30, 2023
Chapter 188: Time Spent Together (Spice and Smut)May 30, 2023
Chapter 187: Perspective (Some Spice)May 30, 2023
Chapter 186: FadingMay 30, 2023
Chapter 185: Birthday GiftsMay 30, 2023
Chapter 184: Birthday CelebrationMay 30, 2023
Chapter 183: Confirming What’s HisMay 30, 2023
Chapter 182: Birthday KissMay 30, 2023
Chapter 181: Coming TogetherMay 30, 2023
Chapter 180: Parental FeelingsMay 30, 2023

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tebriz

Status: chapter 127

Mar 28, 2023

It is just my opinion so don't judge the novel very fast.

pros:

the best part of the story is the fluff and romance between Marian and MC. It was done great. Great first chapters where MC tries to lift the guilt.

Cons:

I have never seen MC so dense and so useless that the interesting part of the story isn't even him but his girlfriend. MC is weak stupid and useless and even his childhood sweetheart went with a girl but she still loves him😒. half of the story is about Marian and how she protects him with Kaeda. Marian is the best part of this story. She really cares about him and has an interesting story. It may be the only story where MC is just a mob though he wasn't a mob in the beginning, he was crying a lot but he still was MC but then...

Other love interests are unnecessary they just exist to be lesbi in a harem! Why? It is like a husband had problems in life and to make it easier he goes somewhere for a time and the wife is like hmmm... instead of helping him I will wait and find a lover but a woman so I don't cheat. Woman choose!

Novels like this make my butt the rocket fueled by anger so that I could fly away from pc to not destroy it in rage.

have you ever felt f@cked in your brain then this novel is for you. There are many plot holes, dump decisions, and characters. I am crying because of this thing not because it is emotional but because it is bad.

P.S. Author, I say it to help you to improve your writing quality not to humiliate you or something.

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yessu2000

Status: chapter 154: families reunited

Apr 22, 2023

First of I want to clarify Jace is OP. like paragon level OP. @tebriz - hope u read it again and give a new review. I ain't writing pros and cons. This is not a product I'm buying.

Just read it if u like it smash like button. if not read author's other book. Its also good. But I'm 100% sure nobody will regret this.

As for the cons @tebriz say's

- Image urself, like mom coma, cashless, jobless, family-less, homeless. I'm surprised to see Jace not become depressed or a too burdened. (u get it?)

- As for being dense, dude was fighting whole life for mom's treatment. how can see other things as romance.

- Just give it a chance or upto Vol 1 then report me...

as u guys can see I'm totally biased on this. Cause why not ? I love it.

!! (O v O) !!

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KidBuu699

Status: chapter 66: reunion

May 6, 2023

Potential Spoilers ahead:

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The best part of this story is the world. A combination of a futuristic cyberpunk type world combined with magic. Add in a the MC of a mercenary type character who is struggling to make ends meet to keep his life together and you'd think it would be a good ride.

And in the beginning it was. I enjoyed the world and the characters that were introduced. However, as time went by and the story progressed it went away from the above mentioned selling point. Now if it just went more into the romance aspect with keeping the original idea it would have been good. However I would say the main character degraded as time went on. He became a weak character that was constantly being saved by his harem.

Now I will say that some people will have an issue with the harem dynamic. I could see many people complaining about NTR with his childhood friend being in a relationship with another woman before they got into a relationship. I didn't really have an issue with this but thought the relationship between the MC and this woman felt forced in the beginning.

To end with at the point that I reached in the story it felt like the MC was more of a stagnate character while the harem did everything. The harem made the decisions. The harem fought the enemies. The harem moved the relationship forward etc etc. Some people might enjoy this type of story. For myself it became a story that I was never excited to see that a new chapter was up.

Best of luck to the author.

P.s - Story and characters aside the writing and sentence structure was great. You will have no issue reading and understanding the story.

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